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    Hi!
    I am currently working on manga named Guardians and I am 100% an amateur. I only do this in my spare time and because I love fantasy and love to to draw. The first page of the prologue is done. English is not my mother tongue so there might be some grammar errors! ATM the grammar is being corrected by a Scottish friend. I gladly take critism in order to make the manga even better. For the tones and highlights I use manga studio EX4.0. Please enjoy!

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    (when reading the manga please read from right to left, the Japanese way)
    The manga: Prologue, first page
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    Here is character design


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    Re: My manga(incomplete)

    I dont know much about drawings/arts, but I say I like it the quality of your art is promising, and its pretty good for an amateur you probably worked hard per page, keep it up, and gud luck.

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    Re: My manga(incomplete)

    You sure you're an amateur? Cause it's really good, But that was only the prologue right? I would like to see more.

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    Re: My manga(incomplete)

    Loooks AWESOME!! STICK TO IT!! BE PASSIONATE! KICK DOWN DOORS AND DRINK COLA WITH FIZZ!! DON'T WAIT AROUND TILL YOU'RE DEAD! NO MATTER HOW MUCH YOU HAVE TO SWEAT, DON'T YOU DARE GIVE UP AND SHOW THE WORLD YOUR TALENT AND BELIEVE IN YOURSELF!
    You're fighting for something you want... That calls for passion and guts!

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    OMFG i am soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo blown away by tht dude.....tht is pro stuff! i mean u can actually make this into a best selling fantisy manga! Im am completly impresed!

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    Wow, your art is amazing! c:
    I really hope to see more, it looks professional~

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    Re: My manga(incomplete)

    The detail in your Artwork is looking great. Your dialogue on the other hand needs improvement. It sounds bland. No offense!!

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