rematche

here's an idea for ya for those who's interested. i plan to create my own gundam with your help by putting your own story in mine. so here it goes...

intro:

in the year 0001 of ao (animeonline...ya i know ), where mankind has reached it's technological and lived amongst the stars and planets but peace is the only thing that mankind still lacks. a war has spread throughout space between the earth and mars. because both wanted to claim power for it is indeed a desperate time.

story:

episode 1: hero for peace

our hero (first come first serve for his name and not too japanese because it's over used.) living with his uncle (name him too.) just moved in a space colony called (ditto but no numbers.) and as they got out from a space bus, he accidentally bump in to a girl (ditto and this time it can be japanese or whatever.) who seemed to be in a hurry and she applogizes to him and countinued to run north. he felt his pocket and realizes that his wallet was gone. so he told his uncle that he was robbed and followed the direction where the girl went. when all of a sudden there's an explosion...

ok...now it's your turn.

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Ochi Gate

i like the idea of earth vs mars, its always earth vs colonies....

as a name for the protagonist, how about, well...i donno.

as for the gundam itself, here some input-
i like how some gundams, like the O.G. have beam sabers in the "backpack", and it looks cool. but this might be a bit overused.

in keeping with the tradition, it needs to be the colors of white, red and blue, of course.

weapons, i think, should be Beam Saber/javelin x 2, "armor-scnider"-esque combat knives x 2 Beam Submachinegun x 1, head vulcans x 2, machine cannons x 2 (in shoulders) and a spread beam, like the DOMs had in 0079.

sorry, im not in the story-telling mood.

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rematche

that's ok...
then that's what the gundam is going to look like...even though that part of the gundam's apperance in story didn't come yet.
at least you could have mentioned gundam's name.
anyway, it's your turn now people...tell me what happends next.

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Ochi Gate

i know, cant think of good names...
Gundam Vertigo [dumb, i know]
Gundam END [idea from eureaka 7]

i cant think of any more good guy names. but if there is a senario where if the Martians [whom i presume will become the bad guys] have a gundam, how about Berserk Gundam?

someone should draw up a pic, i would but i SUCK at drawing gundams. belive me.

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rematche

then gundam vertigo, end, berserk gundam it is. don't worry about the drawing, that's my job even i'm not that good.

here some conceptual art of the characters. i could done more but i'm out of ink.

...hmmmm needs to be improved.

yo! gundam fans out there please lend me your creativity. don't be shy!

anyway back to the story...

when all of a sudden there's an explosion...the explosion was so immense that it triggered all the alarms and then eveyone within in the area began to panic. (hero's name), was caught in a middle of a huge crowd and the only thing he can hear was the voice of his uncle voice calling him. but before he can do anything he saw two huge mobile suits heading towards him and before it could land. a red mobile suit (berserk gundam), came out of no where blasts the two mobile suits in a second. (hero's name), was just standing and looked shock as the berserk gundam cames closer towards him.

next episode 2: (your title)

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Joe Mage

I'm actually workin' on my own gundam story right now that I'm gonna post in the fanfics section, but I think I'll try ta lend a helpin' hand.


When suddenly an explosion rips through the buildin' beside the red suit, knockin' the red suit down. (Our hero) rushes over to the suit to investigate the suit, feeling his way around the cockpit area to find a way to open it. He was about to give up hope when found a switch and pressed it. The cockpit door pops open to reveal a beautiful young woman inside, injured and unconcious; but alive. Having some medical knowledge from serving as an intern at a hospital on earth, he realized that her injury was caused by a bullet wound she recieved prior to the explosion. As he was dressing the wound, she slowly aroused to conciousness and said,

"They're after the Berserk, we must get it away from them. They must not get the Berse..." She then slowly fades to unconciousness again.

"Berserk!!! What are you talking about??!!! Is it this thing??!!!" (Our Hero) said as he desperately tried to stir her to conciousness, but to no avail.

He gingerly lays the girl on a bench nearby and looks to the suit and thinks, "Well, I was hoping to get away from these things, but it doesn't look like I can. Guess I'm going to be a pilot again after all. Oh, no!!! Uncle!!!"

He starts to head into the direction of where he and his uncle were last at, when an explosion shakes the ground, sending (our hero) spiraling. Then a huge Black Mobile Suit appears, it's camera eye whurls around to see (our hero) looking up at it. Then it's eye whurls to the Berserk and begins heading towards it. (Our hero) is left there wondering what to do next...


Hope that u guys like that installment, any1's free ta pick it up from there. I even added a bit of mystery ta the story.

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rematche

ah yes! that's a good installment of the 2nd episode and are you a writer? still you should put some title on it and the hero's name and his uncle.

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Joe Mage

I am an amateur writer and semi-professional artist and what I mean by "semi-professional" is that I was well on my way ta gettin' a bachelor's degree, in art, when I was stricken wit cancer and hadta quit.

I haven' really thought of a name for the hero and uncle jus' yet, but I think that I havea good title. How does "Gundam: Crimson Dawn" sound? Kinda fits in wit the "Beserk" part, if u know what I mean?

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rematche

then "Gundam: Crimson Dawn" it is. wow at least ya have some education when it comes to the arts. me, i've learn them by myself.
btw, can you draw a ms or even the berserk gundam?

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Joe Mage

I'd b happy ta give it a shot. It'd b the first time that I've ever drawn a Gundam, but I'm willin' ta give it a try. I believe that considerin' Ochi was the one who came up wit the name for the Berserk Gundam, he should b the one ta give the details. Like its armaments, the materials used ta make it, etc., this would help me greatly when I draw it. U two can get together and hammer things out. P.S. I'm gonna do a quick sketch of that black suit this afternoon. I figure that the pilot of that suit can b the main character's rival.

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Ochi Gate

rematche, er..... the hero looks a lot like Kou uraki from 0083.
i no longer have a working scaner, but i can draw ppl no prob, if you want me to.

ahh, berserk gundam.. i think it should be red, to fit with its name, but yet if the main character has it, methinks it should be the standard colors...

well, i say we leave most of the story ideas to Joe, but how about after battling the black gundam, who could turn out to be "the End"[it is black, after all^^] how about Berserk was developed by some third, unknown organization? something happens and Berserk winds up in the hands of the bad guys, who then upgrade The End to more gundam-like, ie two gundam eyes in contrast to the mono camera eye that Joe described.

after prooving the ability to pilot an MS almost noone has seen before, perhaps the good guys [whom i assume is the earth] quickly offer him the position of their own MS, the Gundam Vertigo.

just a request, is the girl whom was found going to turn out like Aina Saharin in the th MS team? i dont really want that to happen, our protaganist needs both his legs at the end of the story...

as for berserk gundam. hows about having mainly meele weapons? an epyon-style...er...beam broadsword?[seeing how epyon's was way way bigger than any other...], beam boomerang[i like that concept] i would almost say to have a shining finger, but.... and it needs at least a beam rifle..

so is it sort of like this?
The END-current bad guy strongest MS, soon upgrades from captured Berserk
Berserk- unknown MS from an unknown faction
Vertigo- not around right now, but built from data observed from Berserk

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