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    Re: Ki Masters OOC/Recruitment


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    Cool!! Till All Are One...ROFL

    Well, I said this would start my brain ticking, & it did. I came up with an entire character & background over 2 rather busy days. Long train trips are always good for inspiration...


    I've run out of time to post him here tonight, but I should have him done by tomorrow. But since it's 1:10 am here while I'm writing this, I better get to bed. Things to do...


    Oh, & you get to see what I meant by ShadowStalker manipulating events...

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    Re: Ki Masters OOC/Recruitment

    Sorry for double posting, but I've finished typing up the sats & bio for a character I think I'll use.

    Name: Goes by the name of Anon (pronounced Ay-non)
    Age: unknown, appears mid 20s
    Dojo/City: Ryu City (Dragon) Ryozanpaku:
    Height: 180cm/5'11"
    Weight: Unknown
    Side:Actions imply Good
    Rank:Unknown, appears to be of Sensei level
    Ki/Chi/Aura colour: Blood Red
    Appearance: Always seen in a dark brown monk style robe, including hood, with his entire body covered. His face is hidden by the hood, a black bandanna just above his eyes & another around his mouth, nose & neck. His hands are rarely seen, though burn scars have seen noticed, as well as the lack of little fingers on both hands. Instead there appears to be some metal where the missing fingers are supposed to be, with metal strips running up his hands. It is also worth noting rectangular boxes have been seen under his robes, attached to his forearms & overlapping his hands, the same width as his arm & about 1 inch high.

    This won't be reviled until he actually fights something other than some street punks, but under his robes is a burn damaged training suit from the dojo of Ryu City, with the "boxes" strapped to the outside of his sleeves, the same length as his forearms.

    Personality: Distant, preferring to keep to himself. Sometimes seems to be talking to himself.

    Technique: Tends to mainly fight in rapid, high speed attacks, which tend to do average damage individually, though together they combine to do much damage.
    MA Moves:
    1; 7 Deadly Sins. Rarely used. (Strikes at 7 locations on the body known to be extra sensitive to damage, e.g. Temple, Groin, allowing for a huge amount of damage) :
    2; Arm Attack Counter (opponent attacks with arms with physical attack, Anon grabs arm with his own from the same side [right arm grabs right, left grabs left], then uses their kinetic energy to pull them in, sliding his other arm below theirs & strikes them in the face & lower stomach/groin repeatedly. Can leave them open for a follow up attack) :
    3; Twisting Tornado Kick (jumping into the air, Anon spins rapidly with 1 of his legs extended, smashing into anyone in the way with great force) {I’m sorry, it is RYU city after all…}
    4; Escape Techniques (not so much an attack, this represents the fact he’s become quite skilled at leaving unseen, performing moves such as jumping between walls, jumping unusually high, scaling walls, etc.)
    Weapons: The "boxes" are actually storage for a pair of ejecting wrist blades on each arm. They are ejected by flexing the tendons that originally controlled the little fingers. There are 2 blades in each box, each about 1 foot long. Both the blades & the boxes are more than capable of blocking most bladed attacks. He also carries smoke bombs for escapes.
    Ki Techniques:
    1;KI-Dash (character seems to slide through opponent, appearing behind them allowing the character to attack them from behind) :
    2;Ki-drain (drains Ki energy from all people nearby, friend or foe, recharging him by how much he drains) :
    3;Ki-dome (creates shielding bubble of Ki energy around character. Drains Ki energy slowly normally, but stronger attacks take more Ki energy to block. Can protect multiple characters) :
    Known Bio: Little is known about this stranger who has drifted into Ryu City. He appears to know his way around, even finding his way to the local dojo without any problems. Upon arriving at the dojo, he has requested to see the master, relating to a matter of great importance. When the guard refused, he was heard saying he wasn’t surprised, followed by you’ll never change Koji, referring to the guard by name. When the guard spun back around to ask how he knew his name, the stranger was nowhere to be seen. He has since been seen is various places, usually talking to himself before moving on to the next location.

    If you want, I’ll PM you his true background. It’s a bit long, plus since he turned up, he’s been reluctant, even evasive about his life story. Oh, that goes for you too, Soldat of life. If either of you would like it, just ask, either through a post or PM. Then you'll find out for sure just what ShadowStalker has to do with this...


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    Re: Ki Masters OOC/Recruitment

    Heyo people! I'm the new girl here. And I do appear to be the only female... Do correct me if I'm wrong. Posting my character sheet here for easy reference...



    Name: Hotaru Wu

    Age: 17

    Dojo/City: Saru City

    Height:5'2

    Weight:42kg

    Side: Neutral

    Ki/Chi/Aura colour: Shades of Brown and Green and a hint of red

    Appearance: Small and lithe, the dull colours of her dark green blouse and brown pants keep unwonted attention away from her. She occasionally dons a traditional dark-red Chinese outfit for night outings The first feature most notice, her eyes are bright yellow, resembling gold, and always hold a mischievous glint. With lightly tanned skin and oriental looks, She can easily be mistaken for an outsider, but is of a pure Chinese lineage. Well endowed, with high cheek bones and thick charcoal-black hair that cascades down her back in layers, she can manipulate her looks to her advantage, to buy over any man, with dirty thoughts of course. she is nimble on her feet and just the way traditional Chinese like it, her feet are dainty

    Personality: Though a fun-loving female, she generally keeps to herself, only opening up to several fellow Dojo mates and close friends. Hotaru is wary of placing her trust in anyone, but once she decides to do so, she would be loyal to her friend until a situation pushes her do otherwise. Beware though, when she is pushed past her boundaries of calm and into anger. she can be very aggressive when provoked, and will not hesitate to inflict any hurt on those who truly wish her harm. But under her seemingly cold exterior, lies a heart of gold. Hotaru will never hesitate to help any in need, willing to plunge her life to respond to a plea for help, be it to heal someone, or save another from bullies. she is also impulsive at times, more so when she is angry

    Hobbies: Hotaru regularly takes frequent trips to the forest to observe wild life, their contribution to nature and the way they defend themselves or attack another. She also collects plants specimens to learn more about their properties and how they would benefit others. Singing is also a favourite past-time of hers, but only unsuspecting passer-bys have ever chanced upon her while singing

    MA Moves:

    1.Primate Chatter. Manipulating her voice box, she would produce a series of disconcerting chattering-like noises (which can be altered to suit her needs) to throw her opponent off concentration. At the same time, she would be leaping around in a seemingly random manner before taking the opponent by surprise with a sudden leap into the air, spinning thrice in quick succession to gain momentum and finally swinging her leg to hit a soft spot, neck etc.

    2.Twisting Confusion. First leap towards the opponent, and when inches from them, twisting muscles to change direction. All done in rapid succession to confuse the the opponent. When it is least expected, aim for the spot and don't change direction at the moment, before repeating the process again.

    3.Subtle Loss. When attacked, instead of retaliating, defend. When the opponent is exhausted and expects no retaliation, dart in and hit them hard in the stomach, for they will lose their breath.

    4.Tactless Fighter.
    Just leaping into the fight with apparent thoughtlessness and using both hands and feet to attack the opponent. [hand - neck (in hopes of paralysis). Feet - legs (sweep them off their feet) / Stomach (force them to double over and be vulnerable to attacks until they recover)

    Weapon: Whip

    Ki Techniques:

    Monkey See, monkey Do. Ki that takes multiple forms of unpredictable monkeys of different sizes, the larger ones would first attack from all directions and the smaller one would follow suit to inflict damage

    Fingertip Absorption. All living things have Ki. Ki that has been collected for her benefactor - nature, will be gathered at her fingertips, or occasionally when she has no other choice, selectively from a group of healthy living humans who can afford the lost of Ki. After which, she would direct the Ki to where it is needed.

    Darting Plants. Ki take the shape of thorny yet deceptively beautiful plants, and fling thorn-like darts at unsuspecting people

    Bio: She had been abandoned from young and turned to the forest for refuge. Everything that she had learnt, had come from interacting with animals that had grown close to her, or by observing the animals as they went about their natural business. She had a tight bond with the monkeys in the forest, for they were most alike to humans, hence her monkey-like abilities. Then nine, she was chanced upon by the Master of the Saru City Dojo while collecting food reserves. The Master took her in on account of her affinity with monkeys and was aptly named Hotaru, for she had a disconcerting ability to move quickly from one place to another and lit up the world of the older folks with her gentle care. However, none but herself knows her name. Or knew her name, for the years in the forest had limited her speech. And even though she had quickly picked up neccessary conversation skills, she never quite remembered her real name, but only her surname. So far, she is still only a student of the Dojo, but aims to be the sensei one day.

    So by the way, Cartoon King, if anything is different here, do notify me. I spent a lot of time cutting down on the number of letter/spaces that I used, and I can't quite remember if I took out anything from my character sheet itself...

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    Re: Ki Masters OOC/Recruitment

    Nice character. I'm not the one that has to approve it, so it doesn't really matter, but i like it. How long did it take to develop her?

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    Re: Ki Masters OOC/Recruitment

    Daniel219, I understand you like to keep your characters mysterious and enigmatic chars can be fun, as they can get you guessing.
    I spotted the Ryu City referance, knew that would be used.
    Anyway, the char is ok mysterious but then I'm not fully convinced, but if Anon is the Ryu city sensei, then it's ok, as it seems difficult for me to see him as a student.
    If he has bandanas over his head and lower face under the hood, then his eyes would right? If so, please mention eye colour.

    Please also explain more how Ki Dash would work. Does he get engulfed in Ki or feet are covered in Ki. Explain.

    Escape techniques in Martial Arts? Never heard of it. Though it can be useful for escaping battles outside the trials.

    Any I'll PM you for further info and questions concerning background, as you've requested.

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    Re: Ki Masters OOC/Recruitment

    I typed it out over a period of two days... In total I spent about two-three hours, even though most of it was spent rearranging my sentence structures and correcting any glaringly obvious spelling and spelling mistakes. Yupp. If you need help, don't hesitate to pm me. The fun is in the making of the character...

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    Re: Ki Masters OOC/Recruitment

    Sorry, I guess I missed a couple of things. He has brown eyes, with the bandannas leaving a gap just wide enough. He doesn't like to reveil his face.

    As for the Ki-Dash, he starts glowing with Ki energy, then runs/slides towards his opponant, except instead of hitting him, he passes right through, as if he was a ghost. Now since he's on the other side of them, he can attack them before they can raise their guard.

    I'm going to fix up a few things you made me notice I screwed up on, them I'll send you his real background. Until then, here's his background, with the above changes.

    Name: Goes by the name of Anon (pronounced Ay-non)
    Age: unknown, appears mid 20s
    Dojo/City: Ryu City (Dragon) Ryozanpaku:
    Height: 180cm/5'11"
    Weight: Unknown
    Side:Actions imply Good
    Rank:Unknown, appears to be of Sensei level
    Ki/Chi/Aura colour: Blood Red
    Appearance: Always seen in a dark brown monk style robe, including hood, with his entire body covered. His face is hidden by the hood, a black bandanna just above his Brown eyes & another around his mouth, nose & neck. His hands are rarely seen, though burn scars have seen noticed, as well as the lack of little fingers on both hands. Instead there appears to be some metal where the missing fingers are supposed to be, with metal strips running up his hands. It is also worth noting rectangular boxes have been seen under his robes, attached to his forearms & overlapping his hands, the same width as his arm & about 1 inch high.

    This won't be reviled until he actually fights something other than some street punks, but under his robes is a burn damaged training suit from the dojo of Ryu City, with the "boxes" strapped to the outside of his sleeves, the same length as his forearms.

    Personality: Distant, preferring to keep to himself. Sometimes seems to be talking to himself.

    Technique: Tends to mainly fight in rapid, high speed attacks, which tend to do average damage individually, though together they combine to do much damage.
    MA Moves:
    1; 7 Deadly Sins. Rarely used. (Strikes at 7 locations on the body known to be extra sensitive to damage, e.g. Temple, Groin, allowing for a huge amount of damage) :
    2; Arm Attack Counter (opponent attacks with arms with physical attack, Anon grabs arm with his own from the same side [right arm grabs right, left grabs left], then uses their kinetic energy to pull them in, sliding his other arm below theirs & strikes them in the face & lower stomach/groin repeatedly. Can leave them open for a follow up attack) :
    3; Twisting Tornado Kick (jumping into the air, Anon spins rapidly with 1 of his legs extended, smashing into anyone in the way with great force) {I’m sorry, it is RYU city after all…}
    4; Escape Techniques (not so much an attack, this represents the fact he’s become quite skilled at leaving unseen, performing moves such as jumping between walls, jumping unusually high, scaling walls, etc.)
    Weapons: The "boxes" are actually storage for a pair of ejecting wrist blades on each arm. They are ejected by flexing the tendons that originally controlled the little fingers. There are 2 blades in each box, each about 1 foot long. Both the blades & the boxes are more than capable of blocking most bladed attacks. He also carries smoke bombs for escapes.
    Ki Techniques:
    1;KI-Dash (character glows with Ki energy, , then runs/slides towards his opponant, except instead of hitting him, he passes right through, as if he was a ghost. Now since he's on the other side of them, he can attack them before they can raise their guard.) :
    2;Ki-drain (drains Ki energy from all people nearby, friend or foe, recharging him by how much he drains. “Beams” of Ki are launched at anyone close enough, then their Ki is drained through them, visible through the “tubes” of the character’s Ki energy.) :
    3;Ki-dome (creates shielding bubble of Ki energy around character. Drains Ki energy slowly normally, but stronger attacks take more Ki energy to block. Can protect multiple characters) :
    Known Bio: Little is known about this stranger who has drifted into Ryu City. He appears to know his way around, even finding his way to the local dojo without any problems. Upon arriving at the dojo, he has requested to see the master, relating to a matter of great importance. When the guard refused, he was heard saying he wasn’t surprised, followed by you’ll never change Koji, referring to the guard by name. When the guard spun back around to ask how he knew his name, the stranger was nowhere to be seen. He has since been seen is various places, usually talking to himself before moving on to the next location.

    Oh, & Koji is the name I used for the guy guarding the gates when Anon turned up. He isn't a character I'm planning to use, just someone I used to show that Anon seems to know his way around, even though he's only just turned up. I listed him as coming from Ryu City because he seems to know his way around, plus he's never been spotted anywhere else so far.


    EDIT: Seems I made it too long. It keeps asking me to cut it down. I guess I could post it here, just as long as people realize it's not what's know about him, it's his actual story. That alright?
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    Re: Ki Masters OOC/Recruitment

    I wouldn't say screw up, just missing some details I prefer.
    Character profile's much better now, although if you still want to improve, I'm not stopping you.
    Anon's in. Congratulations!!!

    Note: Anyone reading this, please listen. I just found that Ryozanpaku is not an original dojo name since it can be found in an anime (not sure of the name), so I'm deleting the gym name allowing anyone to come up with an original name.
    Sorry for not seeing this earlier.

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