Ki Masters OOC/Recruitment - Page 2

LordCastigator · Jun 18, 2007, 08:12 AM

Nice character. I'm not the one that has to approve it, so it doesn't really matter, but i like it. How long did it take to develop her?

Cartoon King · Jun 18, 2007, 04:36 PM

Daniel219, I understand you like to keep your characters mysterious and enigmatic chars can be fun, as they can get you guessing.
I spotted the Ryu City referance, knew that would be used.

Anyway, the char is ok mysterious but then I'm not fully convinced, but if Anon is the Ryu city sensei, then it's ok, as it seems difficult for me to see him as a student.
If he has bandanas over his head and lower face under the hood, then his eyes would right? If so, please mention eye colour.

Please also explain more how Ki Dash would work. Does he get engulfed in Ki or feet are covered in Ki. Explain.

Escape techniques in Martial Arts? Never heard of it. Though it can be useful for escaping battles outside the trials.

Any I'll PM you for further info and questions concerning background, as you've requested.

LouisaDeztini · Jun 19, 2007, 12:31 AM

I typed it out over a period of two days... In total I spent about two-three hours, even though most of it was spent rearranging my sentence structures and correcting any glaringly obvious spelling and spelling mistakes. Yupp. If you need help, don't hesitate to pm me.

The fun is in the making of the character...

LordCastigator · Jun 19, 2007, 07:12 AM

Sorry, I guess I missed a couple of things. He has brown eyes, with the bandannas leaving a gap just wide enough. He doesn't like to reveil his face.

As for the Ki-Dash, he starts glowing with Ki energy, then runs/slides towards his opponant, except instead of hitting him, he passes right through, as if he was a ghost. Now since he's on the other side of them, he can attack them before they can raise their guard.

I'm going to fix up a few things you made me notice I screwed up on, them I'll send you his real background. Until then, here's his background, with the above changes.

Name: Goes by the name of Anon (pronounced Ay-non)
Age: unknown, appears mid 20s
Dojo/City: Ryu City (Dragon) Ryozanpaku:
Height: 180cm/5'11"
Weight: Unknown
Side:Actions imply Good
Rank:Unknown, appears to be of Sensei level
Ki/Chi/Aura colour: Blood Red
Appearance: Always seen in a dark brown monk style robe, including hood, with his entire body covered. His face is hidden by the hood, a black bandanna just above his Brown eyes & another around his mouth, nose & neck. His hands are rarely seen, though burn scars have seen noticed, as well as the lack of little fingers on both hands. Instead there appears to be some metal where the missing fingers are supposed to be, with metal strips running up his hands. It is also worth noting rectangular boxes have been seen under his robes, attached to his forearms & overlapping his hands, the same width as his arm & about 1 inch high.

This won't be reviled until he actually fights something other than some street punks, but under his robes is a burn damaged training suit from the dojo of Ryu City, with the "boxes" strapped to the outside of his sleeves, the same length as his forearms.

Personality: Distant, preferring to keep to himself. Sometimes seems to be talking to himself.

Technique: Tends to mainly fight in rapid, high speed attacks, which tend to do average damage individually, though together they combine to do much damage.
MA Moves:
1; 7 Deadly Sins. Rarely used. (Strikes at 7 locations on the body known to be extra sensitive to damage, e.g. Temple, Groin, allowing for a huge amount of damage) :
2; Arm Attack Counter (opponent attacks with arms with physical attack, Anon grabs arm with his own from the same side [right arm grabs right, left grabs left], then uses their kinetic energy to pull them in, sliding his other arm below theirs & strikes them in the face & lower stomach/groin repeatedly. Can leave them open for a follow up attack) :
3; Twisting Tornado Kick (jumping into the air, Anon spins rapidly with 1 of his legs extended, smashing into anyone in the way with great force) {I’m sorry, it is RYU city after all…}
4; Escape Techniques (not so much an attack, this represents the fact he’s become quite skilled at leaving unseen, performing moves such as jumping between walls, jumping unusually high, scaling walls, etc.)
Weapons: The "boxes" are actually storage for a pair of ejecting wrist blades on each arm. They are ejected by flexing the tendons that originally controlled the little fingers. There are 2 blades in each box, each about 1 foot long. Both the blades & the boxes are more than capable of blocking most bladed attacks. He also carries smoke bombs for escapes.
Ki Techniques:
1;KI-Dash (character glows with Ki energy, , then runs/slides towards his opponant, except instead of hitting him, he passes right through, as if he was a ghost. Now since he's on the other side of them, he can attack them before they can raise their guard.) :
2;Ki-drain (drains Ki energy from all people nearby, friend or foe, recharging him by how much he drains. “Beams” of Ki are launched at anyone close enough, then their Ki is drained through them, visible through the “tubes” of the character’s Ki energy.) :
3;Ki-dome (creates shielding bubble of Ki energy around character. Drains Ki energy slowly normally, but stronger attacks take more Ki energy to block. Can protect multiple characters) :
Known Bio: Little is known about this stranger who has drifted into Ryu City. He appears to know his way around, even finding his way to the local dojo without any problems. Upon arriving at the dojo, he has requested to see the master, relating to a matter of great importance. When the guard refused, he was heard saying he wasn’t surprised, followed by you’ll never change Koji, referring to the guard by name. When the guard spun back around to ask how he knew his name, the stranger was nowhere to be seen. He has since been seen is various places, usually talking to himself before moving on to the next location.

Oh, & Koji is the name I used for the guy guarding the gates when Anon turned up. He isn't a character I'm planning to use, just someone I used to show that Anon seems to know his way around, even though he's only just turned up. I listed him as coming from Ryu City because he seems to know his way around, plus he's never been spotted anywhere else so far.

EDIT: Seems I made it too long. It keeps asking me to cut it down. I guess I could post it here, just as long as people realize it's not what's know about him, it's his actual story. That alright?

Cartoon King · Jun 21, 2007, 05:30 AM

I wouldn't say screw up, just missing some details I prefer.
Character profile's much better now, although if you still want to improve, I'm not stopping you.

Anon's in. Congratulations!!!

Note: Anyone reading this, please listen. I just found that Ryozanpaku is not an original dojo name since it can be found in an anime (not sure of the name), so I'm deleting the gym name allowing anyone to come up with an original name.
Sorry for not seeing this earlier.

LordCastigator · Jun 22, 2007, 07:42 AM

Yay!!

I did screw a few things up, just not on this site. I've written his whole background on my computer, so I can refer to it if need be. It might help deciding what he's going to do next, not I should have a problem.

Thanks again. Now, to work out some battle plans. Oh wait, just did it...

rock on · Jun 29, 2007, 09:11 AM

When will it start? And how long will the rpg be?

Cartoon King · Jun 29, 2007, 02:20 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by rock on

When will it start? And how long will the rpg be?

Answer for both: Never and Forever.

Only Joshing.

Until all the dojos have an equal amount of students & sensei. Like about 3-4 students per school. (I know that it seems unoriginal, but what the hey). The same goes for the Dark Dojo residents.

How long? No idea. Depends on out come really.

Please keep posts in to this alive and fresh.

LordCastigator · Jun 30, 2007, 06:13 AM

So what, post a message in here every now & again? OK, sounds doable. I'm not sure if we will get that many people, but I'm hoping they prove me wrong.

Might be an idea to post a link to the actual topic once it actually starts. That way people can read this recruiting topic, then read what's happened so far & maybe even join in.

Oh, by the way, who's Josh? :P

LouisaDeztini · Jun 30, 2007, 07:47 AM

Did I just hear someone mention 'Josh'?
If it concerns Josh Groban, I'll be more than happy to talk.
But sadly, no Daniel. I think Cartoon King meant 'Just Kidding'.
Am I right on this one?
On man, if this is the same as Soldat's...
We'll take forever to recruit 3-4 people per dojo...

Cartoon King · Jun 30, 2007, 08:13 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by LouisaDeztini

Did I just hear someone mention 'Josh'?
If it concerns Josh Groban, I'll be more than happy to talk.
But sadly, no Daniel. I think Cartoon King meant 'Just Kidding'.
Am I right on this one?
On man, if this is the same as Soldat's...
We'll take forever to recruit 3-4 people per dojo...

Correct.

"Just joshing" is one of the british slangs for "Just kidding".
But I understand (at least I think) Daniel's punchline. Very witty

Anyway, back to the point. It might take forever or might not. It depends whether further people are interested in this little number. I personally don't want this to die on me, but I also want to be fair too.

I hope more people would be interested. This is fresh material.
I'll also need to be more familiar with how to operate a rpg.

P.S. I don't mean number literally.

Jun 18, 2007, 08:12 AM	#12 (permalink)
LordCastigator Pro Utilitate Hominum Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: You know that feeling, like you're being watched... Posts: 610 Thanks: 3 Thanked 13 Times in 13 Posts Credits: 13,336	Re: Ki Masters OOC/Recruitment Nice character. I'm not the one that has to approve it, so it doesn't really matter, but i like it. How long did it take to develop her? __________________ The A$$hole previously known as Daniel219 Thanks a million for this sig Pyro_psyco. Too true... My Gundam story. Please read it, please...
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Jun 18, 2007, 04:36 PM	#13 (permalink)
Cartoon King Newbie Join Date: Apr 2007 Posts: 97 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 194	Re: Ki Masters OOC/Recruitment Daniel219, I understand you like to keep your characters mysterious and enigmatic chars can be fun, as they can get you guessing. I spotted the Ryu City referance, knew that would be used. Anyway, the char is ok mysterious but then I'm not fully convinced, but if Anon is the Ryu city sensei, then it's ok, as it seems difficult for me to see him as a student. If he has bandanas over his head and lower face under the hood, then his eyes would right? If so, please mention eye colour. Please also explain more how Ki Dash would work. Does he get engulfed in Ki or feet are covered in Ki. Explain. Escape techniques in Martial Arts? Never heard of it. Though it can be useful for escaping battles outside the trials. Any I'll PM you for further info and questions concerning background, as you've requested.
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Jun 19, 2007, 12:31 AM	#14 (permalink)
LouisaDeztini Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Little Red Dot Posts: 133 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 381	Re: Ki Masters OOC/Recruitment I typed it out over a period of two days... In total I spent about two-three hours, even though most of it was spent rearranging my sentence structures and correcting any glaringly obvious spelling and spelling mistakes. Yupp. If you need help, don't hesitate to pm me. The fun is in the making of the character... __________________
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Jun 19, 2007, 07:12 AM	#15 (permalink)
LordCastigator Pro Utilitate Hominum Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: You know that feeling, like you're being watched... Posts: 610 Thanks: 3 Thanked 13 Times in 13 Posts Credits: 13,336	Re: Ki Masters OOC/Recruitment Sorry, I guess I missed a couple of things. He has brown eyes, with the bandannas leaving a gap just wide enough. He doesn't like to reveil his face. As for the Ki-Dash, he starts glowing with Ki energy, then runs/slides towards his opponant, except instead of hitting him, he passes right through, as if he was a ghost. Now since he's on the other side of them, he can attack them before they can raise their guard. I'm going to fix up a few things you made me notice I screwed up on, them I'll send you his real background. Until then, here's his background, with the above changes. Name: Goes by the name of Anon (pronounced Ay-non) Age: unknown, appears mid 20s Dojo/City: Ryu City (Dragon) Ryozanpaku: Height: 180cm/5'11" Weight: Unknown Side:Actions imply Good Rank:Unknown, appears to be of Sensei level Ki/Chi/Aura colour: Blood Red Appearance: Always seen in a dark brown monk style robe, including hood, with his entire body covered. His face is hidden by the hood, a black bandanna just above his Brown eyes & another around his mouth, nose & neck. His hands are rarely seen, though burn scars have seen noticed, as well as the lack of little fingers on both hands. Instead there appears to be some metal where the missing fingers are supposed to be, with metal strips running up his hands. It is also worth noting rectangular boxes have been seen under his robes, attached to his forearms & overlapping his hands, the same width as his arm & about 1 inch high. This won't be reviled until he actually fights something other than some street punks, but under his robes is a burn damaged training suit from the dojo of Ryu City, with the "boxes" strapped to the outside of his sleeves, the same length as his forearms. Personality: Distant, preferring to keep to himself. Sometimes seems to be talking to himself. Technique: Tends to mainly fight in rapid, high speed attacks, which tend to do average damage individually, though together they combine to do much damage. MA Moves: 1; 7 Deadly Sins. Rarely used. (Strikes at 7 locations on the body known to be extra sensitive to damage, e.g. Temple, Groin, allowing for a huge amount of damage) : 2; Arm Attack Counter (opponent attacks with arms with physical attack, Anon grabs arm with his own from the same side [right arm grabs right, left grabs left], then uses their kinetic energy to pull them in, sliding his other arm below theirs & strikes them in the face & lower stomach/groin repeatedly. Can leave them open for a follow up attack) : 3; Twisting Tornado Kick (jumping into the air, Anon spins rapidly with 1 of his legs extended, smashing into anyone in the way with great force) {I’m sorry, it is RYU city after all…} 4; Escape Techniques (not so much an attack, this represents the fact he’s become quite skilled at leaving unseen, performing moves such as jumping between walls, jumping unusually high, scaling walls, etc.) Weapons: The "boxes" are actually storage for a pair of ejecting wrist blades on each arm. They are ejected by flexing the tendons that originally controlled the little fingers. There are 2 blades in each box, each about 1 foot long. Both the blades & the boxes are more than capable of blocking most bladed attacks. He also carries smoke bombs for escapes. Ki Techniques: 1;KI-Dash (character glows with Ki energy, , then runs/slides towards his opponant, except instead of hitting him, he passes right through, as if he was a ghost. Now since he's on the other side of them, he can attack them before they can raise their guard.) : 2;Ki-drain (drains Ki energy from all people nearby, friend or foe, recharging him by how much he drains. “Beams” of Ki are launched at anyone close enough, then their Ki is drained through them, visible through the “tubes” of the character’s Ki energy.) : 3;Ki-dome (creates shielding bubble of Ki energy around character. Drains Ki energy slowly normally, but stronger attacks take more Ki energy to block. Can protect multiple characters) : Known Bio: Little is known about this stranger who has drifted into Ryu City. He appears to know his way around, even finding his way to the local dojo without any problems. Upon arriving at the dojo, he has requested to see the master, relating to a matter of great importance. When the guard refused, he was heard saying he wasn’t surprised, followed by you’ll never change Koji, referring to the guard by name. When the guard spun back around to ask how he knew his name, the stranger was nowhere to be seen. He has since been seen is various places, usually talking to himself before moving on to the next location. Oh, & Koji is the name I used for the guy guarding the gates when Anon turned up. He isn't a character I'm planning to use, just someone I used to show that Anon seems to know his way around, even though he's only just turned up. I listed him as coming from Ryu City because he seems to know his way around, plus he's never been spotted anywhere else so far. EDIT: Seems I made it too long. It keeps asking me to cut it down. I guess I could post it here, just as long as people realize it's not what's know about him, it's his actual story. That alright? __________________ The A$$hole previously known as Daniel219 Thanks a million for this sig Pyro_psyco. Too true... My Gundam story. Please read it, please...
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Jun 21, 2007, 05:30 AM	#16 (permalink)
Cartoon King Newbie Join Date: Apr 2007 Posts: 97 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 194	Re: Ki Masters OOC/Recruitment I wouldn't say screw up, just missing some details I prefer. Character profile's much better now, although if you still want to improve, I'm not stopping you. Anon's in. Congratulations!!! Note: Anyone reading this, please listen. I just found that Ryozanpaku is not an original dojo name since it can be found in an anime (not sure of the name), so I'm deleting the gym name allowing anyone to come up with an original name. Sorry for not seeing this earlier.
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Jun 22, 2007, 07:42 AM	#17 (permalink)
LordCastigator Pro Utilitate Hominum Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: You know that feeling, like you're being watched... Posts: 610 Thanks: 3 Thanked 13 Times in 13 Posts Credits: 13,336	Re: Ki Masters OOC/Recruitment Yay!! I did screw a few things up, just not on this site. I've written his whole background on my computer, so I can refer to it if need be. It might help deciding what he's going to do next, not I should have a problem. Thanks again. Now, to work out some battle plans. Oh wait, just did it... __________________ The A$$hole previously known as Daniel219 Thanks a million for this sig Pyro_psyco. Too true... My Gundam story. Please read it, please...
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Jun 29, 2007, 09:11 AM	#18 (permalink)
rock on Upcoming Legend Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: USA nebraska Posts: 506 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Credits: 2,004	Re: Ki Masters OOC/Recruitment When will it start? And how long will the rpg be? __________________ 92% of teens moved to rap. I am one of the 8% rebelions
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Jun 30, 2007, 06:13 AM	#20 (permalink)
LordCastigator Pro Utilitate Hominum Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: You know that feeling, like you're being watched... Posts: 610 Thanks: 3 Thanked 13 Times in 13 Posts Credits: 13,336	Re: Ki Masters OOC/Recruitment So what, post a message in here every now & again? OK, sounds doable. I'm not sure if we will get that many people, but I'm hoping they prove me wrong. Might be an idea to post a link to the actual topic once it actually starts. That way people can read this recruiting topic, then read what's happened so far & maybe even join in. Oh, by the way, who's Josh? :P __________________ The A$$hole previously known as Daniel219 Thanks a million for this sig Pyro_psyco. Too true... My Gundam story. Please read it, please...
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Jun 30, 2007, 07:47 AM	#21 (permalink)
LouisaDeztini Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Little Red Dot Posts: 133 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 381	Re: Ki Masters OOC/Recruitment Did I just hear someone mention 'Josh'? If it concerns Josh Groban, I'll be more than happy to talk. But sadly, no Daniel. I think Cartoon King meant 'Just Kidding'. Am I right on this one? On man, if this is the same as Soldat's... We'll take forever to recruit 3-4 people per dojo... __________________
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