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    Re: Rewrite

    Seeing the main group in trouble, Daniel chuckled.

    "Guess I get to play now. Alriiiiiight..."

    As the beasts closed on the main group, one of them suddenly flinched it's head to the side, then started clawing at something around it's rightmost eye. Still in the Spirit Realm, Daniel charged forwards & lept infront of the beast, grabbing his sword & ripping it out from behind it's eye, ejecting the eyeball towards the group. Dodging a swing from the wounded creature, it blocked another with the sword before slicing a chunk of tail swung towards him. Leaping to the side of it, he slowly mustered up some psychic energy, the level of damage to this part of the reality making it hard to draw it up. Ducking underneath it, Daniel hit the creature point blank with the blast, flipping it onto the back of the beast next to it.

    To those watching the battle from the Material Plane, the creature seemed to be fighting some invisible enemy, which somehow got it to lift off the ground & land on it's back on the back of another beast. Those looking close enough could have seen Daniel in the tears in reality the beast left behind, but considering what had decided to say 'hello', Daniel figured they would most likely be too busy to notice. However the tears did make it possible for them to hear him...

    "Ahhh, I do like a good fight..."


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    Re: Rewrite

    Jace had silently followed the leading time police the entire time listening and observing this mysterious new force that had suddenly threatened his homeworld again. It was most likely a force that didnt exist yet in his time, though he was glad he was here to be able to stop it. The leader had offered them some sort of protection against whatever could be used to combat the creatures. Seing that he was wearing armor, the suit and badge seemed to be of no use. He had no access to his rift in space to store any times and no pockets to hold it. The gun though he could grip through his restraints though it was a really unconventional way to be able to fight. Though there was something strange about the weapon.

    It eminated an energy he had never felt before, it was even more powerfull than the energy he currently possesed. Though it was only in an extremely small amount within this weapon. He also felt its presence eminating from the suits and other guns. This must be the power to combat this menacing force Jace thought as he examined the strange weapon.

    Ill need more but this should do for now, lets see... Jace closed his eyes and mustering up a massive amount of spiritual energy from within himself to override his restraints he was able to activate the suits analysis sytems. In a few seconds his vizor flashed and multiple readings came up showing the nature of the energy within the suit. "I can absorb it."

    Holding up the suit he willed his suit to create a new entry into his repretoire, for right now he will name it Aevum. A mystical bluish light ran from the suit and down the length of his arm flashing white as it entered the concrescent manifold within his suit becoming one with the omnipotent energy. "Its not nearly enough but its power.." Jace used the trace amounts within his suit and directed it to the restraints on his hands. "Can eventually free me of these contraptions. For now ill just have to continue with the group."

    After awhile the group made it to the center, but plans on learning about this dark force came to an abrupt halt. A roar issued from the void, and the group came under attack from multiple beasts. They seemed transparent but had a form. The leader commanded the group to fight with these strange weapons. Looked like he wouldnt have a choice.

    A massive beast spotted him and ran with blurring speed in his direction. With his skill in battle the beast seemed to be moving in slow motion but the weight of his suit and his current restrained condition prevented him from being able to dodge an massive slash it threw at the group. Jace quickly through up the gun in defence. The beasts claws cleaved it into and slashed gashes in the front part of his armor with massive force. He flew backwards through the air and landed hard on the ground. As the dust settled Jace was laying in a mound of the ground he kicked up, the gun he wielded before strewn in pieces about the area. Suddenly the cuffs blasted off of Jace and he slowly stood up and brushed some of the ground off of his shoulder." My turn." He said as he held up a palm and summoning the energy he absorbed before shot a blast of energy at the beast striking it directly through the chest piercing through it as the beam blasted out of its back. Suddenly the remaining section of its chest exploded and the beast fell in two pieces to the ground.

    He had taken one out, and another seemingly fell by some uknown reason. but in destroying one he drained the small amount of energy he had absorbed. The suit needed to have a massive amount absorbed to be able to control and use it without fear of running out.
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    Re: Rewrite

    Charging himself up with psychic energy, he sent it into his sword then all around his body, creating a shielding coat over his skin to protect him from the creature's touch. With it in place, he'd be safe from the erasing presence the beasts had, but he'd still need to dodge their attacks.

    Jumping onto the upside down beast, still on the back of it's now annoyed neighbor, he plunged his sword deep into where he sensed the most mental activity, hoping to kill it. the thing twitched, then went silent as Daniel pushed it deeper, however it had the opposite reaction from the carrier beast. As the sword has pierced the upside down beast, it had also gone a little way into it's head too, but only enough to hurt it & it didn't like the pain. Thrashing around, it started running in random directions, mostly away from the group. Holding on tight, it wasn't worry on Daniel's face...

    "YEEEEEHHHAAAAAA!!!!!!"

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