This hefty story is told quite well, though the fruit which have names of their powers of sort seem strangely named none the less. Your vocabulary is very diverse and coherent. This world in which you seem to be part of, the character that lives in this world I mean, seems quite interesting and could very well be a place where many could role play. You should submit your idea of a world, describe it, more or less explain what kind of characters could join, further explain the various fruits that exist and the many events that people could use to further create their characters from diverse areas in this world.
This section of the forum is for these stories to take place and not for questions, if you have questions, you can either PM me directly or write your question here:
Sorry for my late reply, I'm currently on my by-yearly dissapearance act from animeonline and the only reasons I answered this is because I felt compelled to check on my baby....the RPing section.
I will be closing this thread as it has been answered and I'm not certain how to merge this post in another thread where it could better serve as a question. You can post your world and idea here if you still want to do so:
Or look in the OOC section here if you want to join a game:
And you should post your character here to keep him safe and easy to find if ever you want to use him in a story: