Thread: Something that annoys me...

The lack of paragraph structure in peoples posts.

might not seem like much to some people, but trying to read a huge square block of text is difficult, and my eyesight isn't what it used to be (its not from age, I'm not that old, spend as much time in front of a computer screen, especially a CRT monitor below 60+hz, and you'll get near sighted too).

I mean, how hard is it to start a new paragraph when you move on to a new train of thought?

For instance, lets look at Dark1Angel's responce to Lebasiara's thread (Please can a man explain to me, cus I can't understand)

Originally Posted by dark1angel

well so far i can tell from your write i think your being a true girlfriend to him and the thing that goes on his mind is that he does not know what else to do other then just buying you random gifts for your anniversary which is not good to do when your a guy trying to buy them random stuff, from my experience i think the best way is to be reasonable with him and tell him upfront to be with you other then receiving something you do not like try your best to talk into him to understand you better because if you dont say anything the gifts and spending separate time will be endless so its better to do the initiative like going direct towards him instead of the indirect way. good luck and hope you get it right.

Thats hard to read, and honestly (since I picked it on a whim with out reading it first), I think no puncuation was used at all and its all one run-on sentence.

Now, I'm going to edit and make it readable. I'll highlight anything I cange.

Originally Posted by dark1angel

Well so far I can tell, your right.

I think you're being a true girlfriend to him and the thing that goes on his mind is that he does not know what else to do other then just buying you random gifts for your anniversary which is not good to do when your a guy trying to buy them random stuff.

From my experience; I think the best way is to be reasonable with him and tell him upfront to be with you other then receiving something you do not like.

Try your best to talk into him and to understand you better; Because if you don't say anything the gifts and spending separate time will be endless so its better to do the initiative like going direct towards him instead of the indirect way. good luck and hope you get it right.

I edited it for grammar as well as paragraph structure.

See how much better that is?

Now I wish that everyone would do this. Because it pisses me off.