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    The Kiss of My Love

    Your beauty overwhelms me
    As I wrap my arms around you
    I press your softness tight
    Great passion fills my inner being
    I'm captured in your embrace
    Your eyes control my very soul
    The touch of your lips, heaven
    Forever frozen in time
    All else fades into nothing.

    Tell me what you think plz
    I found him and I love him with all my heart!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    Re: The Kiss of My Love

    i like, maybe but so more feeling into it, but hey, i'm no expert on poems.but i do really like it.

    A Soul Needs a Purpose to Live.- Gaara

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