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    need help with poem

    i need helpcoming up with a poem abotu the heart that doesn't contain heart or love in it please help
    i cry inside for life anew i die each time im torn in two i live for earth and die for none along comes a god who will always bring peace and tranquility

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    Re: need help with poem

    *lol* maybe i just don't get, but how can you make a poem about the heart, that doesn't contain heart in it do you meen like emotions? or a poem about what the heart is? (a machine for pumpin blood)

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    Re: need help with poem

    If you mean omitting the words "heart" and "love" then that involves the subject matter.

    There are many ways to say love without actually saying it, as with many words in any language. It all depends on how deep you intend to make the poem.
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    Re: need help with poem

    um... *confusion* ... you want someone to write a poem about YOUR feelings, about YOUR heart... please forgive me, but you can't possibly exspect great results here. I mean that in the nicest way possibal. Good Luck!
    I think I've known you all along.
    I just lost your face in the crowed for a while.
    I think I've been holding my breath all my life, until you found me here tonight.
    So ask me now and I'll run away with you.

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    Re: need help with poem

    Quote Originally Posted by Naomi Vaine View Post
    um... *confusion* ... you want someone to write a poem about YOUR feelings, about YOUR heart... please forgive me, but you can't possibly exspect great results here. I mean that in the nicest way possibal. Good Luck!
    no not my heart not my feelings just a poem about the heart in general without using heart or love in the poem
    i cry inside for life anew i die each time im torn in two i live for earth and die for none along comes a god who will always bring peace and tranquility

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    Re: need help with poem

    Hmmm...Maybe I can help you out a bit...
    But you have to some ideas from yourself too...
    Okay...^_^.....
    We are affraid of losing controle...But why should you be affraid of losing it...While you didnt have it...

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    Re: need help with poem

    Quote Originally Posted by mangalovertje View Post
    Hmmm...Maybe I can help you out a bit...
    But you have to some ideas from yourself too...
    Okay...^_^.....
    oh naturaly i will help too so give me ideas and i will put out some ideas too
    i cry inside for life anew i die each time im torn in two i live for earth and die for none along comes a god who will always bring peace and tranquility

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    Re: need help with poem

    Yeah me too i must repay my delt to u party12 i also good with poem here some ex: All i want is freedom a world with no more night n u alway beside me to hold me,love me.That all i ask of u. See but i still working on it n other and also making a story as well as soon as i konw how to post a thread
    If you can feel the pain, you are not badly wounded at all......

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