Thread: need help with poem

*lol* maybe i just don't get, but how can you make a poem about the heart, that doesn't contain heart in it do you meen like emotions? or a poem about what the heart is? (a machine for pumpin blood)

If you mean omitting the words "heart" and "love" then that involves the subject matter.

There are many ways to say love without actually saying it, as with many words in any language. It all depends on how deep you intend to make the poem.

um... *confusion* ... you want someone to write a poem about YOUR feelings, about YOUR heart... please forgive me, but you can't possibly exspect great results here. I mean that in the nicest way possibal. Good Luck!

Originally Posted by Naomi Vaine

um... *confusion* ... you want someone to write a poem about YOUR feelings, about YOUR heart... please forgive me, but you can't possibly exspect great results here. I mean that in the nicest way possibal. Good Luck!

no not my heart not my feelings just a poem about the heart in general without using heart or love in the poem

Hmmm...Maybe I can help you out a bit...
But you have to some ideas from yourself too...
Okay...^_^.....

Originally Posted by mangalovertje

Hmmm...Maybe I can help you out a bit...
But you have to some ideas from yourself too...
Okay...^_^.....

oh naturaly i will help too so give me ideas and i will put out some ideas too

Yeah me too i must repay my delt to u party12 i also good with poem here some ex: All i want is freedom a world with no more night n u alway beside me to hold me,love me.That all i ask of u. See but i still working on it n other and also making a story as well as soon as i konw how to post a thread