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    Re: need help with poem

    elude your own message. keep with words that describe what you're saying but never say the actual word.

    It's like these feelings want me,
    they threaten to fill up every inch-
    lay my mind to rest.
    Kiss me in the night.


    that would be my example of a love poem with neither heart of love in it. i must say, it was only briefly difficult to come up with that stanza. an entire poem might be harder.

    just use a politicians words.
    the love you withhold is the pain you carry.

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    Re: need help with poem

    Sry if that made u mad but i try to k just wat i need someone yelling at me again it never end oh wel wat a drag then
    If you can feel the pain, you are not badly wounded at all......

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    Re: need help with poem

    I couldn't agree more with Flawedmind on this.

    *looks around* I'm surprised no mod has come about and forced this into the poetry section.

    But yes... think of all the words that pertain to how love makes you feel, how it makes you act, and behave. You could even go that creative writing route in digging deep into all senses... what does love look like? Feel like? Taste like? Sound like? Smell like?

    As far as the heart is concerned... you could write about the hearts purpose. Or how you would describe or define it. To me, the metaphorical "heart" is a vessel which holds all things precious to me And, while that redend portion isn't the prime example of fantastic writing... It is a way you can DESCRIBE something without actually using the word in which you are describing.
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    Re: need help with poem

    HM ur right but i cant tell u yet it not the right time to say it but i will tell u someday
    If you can feel the pain, you are not badly wounded at all......

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