Acts of Reasoning [Poem]

Acts of Reasoning

I thought that if you could only understand my reasoning
Maybe you would be
More pleased with me

But it's not like you care
Or ever lent and open ear
You just want to give me that cold stare

Maybe if I wasn’t me
I could just let it all be

My great dream turned nightmare
You watch in despair
Never to tell me how you feel

Written with hate
From me to you
Ignore me while you can
You stupid man

Lost in regret you shall be
Because when I get you back
I can guarantee your sorry

I only want to make you pay
So I can live out the rest of my day
Free from the bitterness
Eating away at me

How could you do this to me
Were you trying to set the monster in me free
Is this, how it is suppose to be

This is my very first poem, that I ever wrote, and I've only written 2. :D

Written with hate
From me to you
Ignore me while you can
You stupid man


I love that part! I simply love your poem, I can relate to that very much when I was younger. I can't wait to see more of your poems.

wow you must be really mad at your boyfriend lol, the poem is great i like it keep it up i hope to see more of your poems.!!^^!!

Ohhhh hate to be in that guys shoes!! lol

Actually, the funny thing, is I kind of forgot why I was so mad in the first place. However, he was just an old friend.

heh, i feel like i meet the wrong girls. your poems fits me well but instead of stupid guy its stupid girl.

well, ill have to keep searching.


i enjoyed what i felt from your peom. cause it felt so same.

-simple

I liked your poem I'm not really good at writing poems so I stick with designing clothes. (I'm good at that) When it comes to poetry I stick by poets not by my poetic talent.

well, in my opinion that was sad