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    Acts of Reasoning [Poem]

    Acts of Reasoning

    I thought that if you could only understand my reasoning
    Maybe you would be
    More pleased with me

    But it's not like you care
    Or ever lent and open ear
    You just want to give me that cold stare

    Maybe if I wasn’t me
    I could just let it all be

    My great dream turned nightmare
    You watch in despair
    Never to tell me how you feel

    Written with hate
    From me to you
    Ignore me while you can
    You stupid man

    Lost in regret you shall be
    Because when I get you back
    I can guarantee your sorry

    I only want to make you pay
    So I can live out the rest of my day
    Free from the bitterness
    Eating away at me

    How could you do this to me
    Were you trying to set the monster in me free
    Is this, how it is suppose to be

    This is my very first poem, that I ever wrote, and I've only written 2.

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    Written with hate
    From me to you
    Ignore me while you can
    You stupid man


    I love that part! I simply love your poem, I can relate to that very much when I was younger. I can't wait to see more of your poems.

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    wow you must be really mad at your boyfriend lol, the poem is great i like it keep it up i hope to see more of your poems.!!^^!!

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    Ohhhh hate to be in that guys shoes!! lol
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    Actually, the funny thing, is I kind of forgot why I was so mad in the first place. However, he was just an old friend.

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    heh, i feel like i meet the wrong girls. your poems fits me well but instead of stupid guy its stupid girl.

    well, ill have to keep searching.


    i enjoyed what i felt from your peom. cause it felt so same.

    -simple

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    I liked your poem I'm not really good at writing poems so I stick with designing clothes. (I'm good at that) When it comes to poetry I stick by poets not by my poetic talent.

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    well, in my opinion that was sad

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