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short but very effective, nice one!
My chest is Ripped Apart.
The Flesh on my Body Burns.
Fragile mind in a Storm of Problems.
Life Lost in my heart.
Gasps of air break a sweat.
Blinked in a world Without you.
-simple
short but very effective, nice one!
Just like your nick states, simple and good. Well done
Last edited by Kikinaki; May 01, 2005 at 04:49 PM.
That was rather scary, I mean the "My chest ripped apart" thing. Makes me think of something rather grotesque. Short, and descriptive. Nice work.
Greetings,
I just wanna thank you all for your comments, and im glad you like my work for its just my emotion.
I will post more but it seems i only write when somethine in life hits me hard.
-simple
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aw! I liked it! short, emotion, descriptive; very, very good.
"I never stopped loving you, I just stopped letting it show."
-Unknown
i liked and it was emotion
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