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    To Amandra With Love (Poem)

    Your smile,
    Your eyes,
    Your lips,
    Your hair,
    But mostly,
    Your heart.
    I desire all of you,
    Not just a part.
    If you were a flower,
    A rose you would be.
    Then I could say,
    That I was kissed by a rose.
    If I could be a part of the flower,
    That is you.
    Then I wouldn’t mind,
    Being the thorns.
    I could protect you,
    From the one’s that try,
    To devour you.
    I will always love you,
    And each time I say it,
    I love you more.
    Each time I write a poem,
    I love you more.
    May God give me eternity,
    With you…. my love.

    Justin McCormick (K‘ Heart)

    Far be it for me to be anything special, when the only special thing I desire with me, is the special person I share my gifts with.

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    NICE. very touching and makes you reflect on things in a poetic fashion. Good job! I really like this one, keep em rollin' in

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    Nice as always. You've described her very well. You truly live up to your name.

    Last edited by Kikinaki; May 08, 2005 at 02:23 AM.

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    well done wey (dude) i like your poem!!!!!!!!!!

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    thank you justin love amandra
    LIFES NOT A GARDEN SO STOP ACTING LIKE A STUPID HOE.

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    So, the frog is amandra, wait if you kiss her she'll maybe change into a beutifull princess

    Nice poem anyways.

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    She already has become more than a princess. She surpassed princess and queen to become an angel.

    Far be it for me to be anything special, when the only special thing I desire with me, is the special person I share my gifts with.

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    awwwwwwww. Justin, Amandra must feel all warm and tingly inside. Once again I am happy for you two.
    LOVE LIFE WORK PAIN SARROW AND THE GRACE OF THE ANGELS TO EVERYONE

    always and forever, through pain and sorrow, through love and joy

    A'Karuya (the young warrior)

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