Watch me slowly convulse in anguish and pain;
I'll never see it rain again.
My body tormented; my soul tortured.
Into the wings of an angel.
To find that it's all a dream.
As the embers dance around my body,
My pain is not eased.
Mixed thoughts, mixed feelings,
Nothing matters anymore.
Sadness overcomes my heart;
Like a frozen palace set on fire.
My body, my soul,
Separated between heaven and earth.
Waking everyday just to want to drift away again.
Like an everflowing sea, my pain runs through.
My tears fall....
I dissolve into blood.
Notes : I kind of have nothing to say about this piece. I was just extremely upset + depressed + suicidal. That was last year... When my life was going wayyyy downhill. :S You'd be seeing more depressing poems from me. Now, tell me to stop! Hehe. :]
again...that was very good :D almost too good :lurk:
It's best to write it than do it. It makes me feel more at ease after I write. I can't wait to see more of your poems.
nice one again. one thumbs up.
i thought its about sadness?!!
I see you like poems wel this one wassn't bad, it was pretty good.
well I don't know wath to say its to good very amazing poem grade AAA+++