This poem makes me feel woozy
Ask and cry
Why.
They say it
Quick response to their fault
Default
To the nature of their way
Lacking
Experience and trust
Blindly thrusting
Their minds into it
Not knowing it’s the flame
That burns them so
Cooling
Not through the words
The mediums
Misconception
Misinterpretation
Where they scream and shout
Rhyme and sing
No
It burns them to
With the desires
To speak
Something that can’t be said
We pretend
Like something is communicated
Felt
Seen
Heard
Released
But no
No lessons learned
We lack the understanding
To know
What not to do
Relations
As confined
As a 9 letter word
As oily as freedom
And as pointless as
You
This poem makes me feel woozy
Like always, a great one.
great stuff Jao. Really well done
nice work good job
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Great work, nice job, sweet!
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Thank you all for your comments. It was an anti-poem poem..Which is ironic for me but whatever. My drive to write has been low for so long.
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