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    Aslei

    When I left you weeping there
    Sitting in your little chair
    Did you think I didn't care
    As yo breath that sorrowful air
    I know that it isn't fair
    But I've got no time to spare
    With this spirit as wild as my hair
    When I see you all I can do is stare
    Because never have I seen one so fair
    To speak to you is something I will not dare
    Because hearing your words seems rare
    There is something you must do to make me see
    Because I've got THC controlling me
    So there is nothing you can do to make me see
    Because I feel there is no changing me


    Months have passed and I remember
    The chilling wind of a bleak December
    All I can ****ing do is sever
    The thought of your beauty from my head
    Even after all the loving words I've said
    Because if I don't I shall soon be dead
    This pain is sratching at my bone.
    And this Loneliness won't leave me alone.

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    hmmmm. interesting. This would definately be good rock song material, nice one

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    This one made me think a bit about certain things. Good rhyming and well i guess you have that philosophy stuff in you to. Nicely written and hope to expect more soon.

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    Great riming, nice poem.

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    Nice nice, I like the beauty of this poem.

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