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    Domme Kasai may be famous one day Kasai may be famous one day Kasai's Avatar
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    Asphyxiatiion

    Asphyxiation
    The life I live is hell.
    I am stuck in a worthless shell.

    My world has many gears,
    that turn by the power of my fears.

    Everyday there was nothing new.
    Until the moment I met you.

    Soaring through the sky was our love,
    like a great flock of endless doves.

    I never thought I'd hear my life sing,
    or feel the joy that you bring.

    I once was silent and cold,
    then your warmth melted my soul.

    I just wish this would only last.
    Instead of you becoming my past.

    I am no longer in the abyss.
    I float in the softness of your kiss.


    LaRhae Freeman

    Copyright ©2005 LaRhae Freeman
    Seduced by Flesh


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    Commander Ham Chiefblackhammer is making a name for themselves Chiefblackhammer is making a name for themselves Chiefblackhammer is making a name for themselves Chiefblackhammer's Avatar
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    I like your poem, seems like you cut it short but still very nice.


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    Quote Originally Posted by chiefblackhammer
    I like your poem, seems like you cut it short but still very nice.
    It is a nice poem....but kasai didnt write it....lol

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    Quote Originally Posted by Boo45
    It is a nice poem....but kasai didnt write it....lol
    lol, yup someone didn't read the copyright

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    Domme Kasai may be famous one day Kasai may be famous one day Kasai's Avatar
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    LMAO!

    Ahem. LaRhae Freeman is me. Kasai is LaRhae Freeman. Get it straight. ^-^

    Call me Ray. ^_~ Or Kas, or Kasai. What ever you prefer.
    Seduced by Flesh


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    lol, I thought it might be you, but I wasn't sure so I didn't post anything.

    the poem is great, but why the sudden copyright? Are people stealing them?

    Hmmm... He's not technically human, so it wouldn't really be like cannibalism...
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    Lol. Nopes. I uploaded this poem on to a site called poetry.com
    So I copy and pasted what was on there here. ^-^ Like I do all my poems. Cept from another site. *points to siggy where it says my poetry*

    ^_~
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    Kasai, I did assume it was written by you as it would be stupid to post someone elses work thanks for clearing that up and making at least not look like a moron, lol!


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