The life I live is hell.
I am stuck in a worthless shell.
My world has many gears,
that turn by the power of my fears.
Everyday there was nothing new.
Until the moment I met you.
Soaring through the sky was our love,
like a great flock of endless doves.
I never thought I'd hear my life sing,
or feel the joy that you bring.
I once was silent and cold,
then your warmth melted my soul.
I just wish this would only last.
Instead of you becoming my past.
I am no longer in the abyss.
I float in the softness of your kiss.
Copyright ©2005 LaRhae Freeman
I like your poem, seems like you cut it short but still very nice.
It is a nice poem....but kasai didnt write it....lol
Originally Posted by chiefblackhammer
lol, yup someone didn't read the copyright
Originally Posted by Boo45
Ahem. LaRhae Freeman is me. Kasai is LaRhae Freeman. Get it straight. ^-^
Call me Ray. ^_~ Or Kas, or Kasai. What ever you prefer.
lol, I thought it might be you, but I wasn't sure so I didn't post anything.
the poem is great, but why the sudden copyright? Are people stealing them?
Lol. Nopes. I uploaded this poem on to a site called poetry.com
So I copy and pasted what was on there here. ^-^ Like I do all my poems. Cept from another site. *points to siggy where it says my poetry*
Kasai, I did assume it was written by you as it would be stupid to post someone elses work thanks for clearing that up and making at least not look like a moron, lol!