oh... Its beautiful! I love it so much. perfect!just perfect!
Beneath her Eyes........
So much pain
too much to take
a girl who is dying
in a world thats fake
and no one heard
or saw her cries
in the midst of darkness
they all were blind
she walked alone
on a dark street
a mistake to humanity
she felt incomplete
her shadows haunted
and people ran away
if only they noticed
she might have stayed
A rope awaited her
to steal her last breath
if her life wasnt damaged
she wouldnt taste death
she never meant to hide it
although she always tried
if only people noticed
the pain beneath her eyes....
“You want to live—but do you know how to live? You are scared of dying—and, tell me, is the kind of life you lead really any different from being dead?”
~ Seneca
oh... Its beautiful! I love it so much. perfect!just perfect!
Kikinaki,
VERY WELLL WRITTEN,
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very true, i pray for the girl who took the rope.
for we really live in a dream.
-simple
very nice..I write similar poems...Urs r very angst and yet they show meaning
Brent
i rate that peom the best and it was perfect
wow ... sounds like you can really read emotions, if not anyone elses, at least you own and i love the quote at the end. really makes ya think.............
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