animechick

yall this isnt suppose to rhyme so ..yeah ..more of a freeform hope ya like!!
this is relating to those killed in the resenr tsunami

beyond the death

the hurt .
the pain .
the death.
you hear it
and you see it
but what else is their
after the deaths
what is left?
you may say"nothing"
which is somewhat true
but not completely
what is left?
people
some in pain
because of injury
some in pain
because of loss
some in pian
because they cannot protect
those who have died
those who are dying
and those who will die
you see pictures
destruction
devestation
death
but what is left?
the people who have lost loved ones
sisters
brothers
mothers
fathers
cousins
aunts
uncles
friends
the list of death
80,000
the list effected
millions
my piont is?
though many have died
if has effected nearly everyone
if 1 dies
everyone that ever knew that person is effected
its sad
so many deaths and so many effected
what is left behind?
few belongings
distant memories
broken hearts

this is dedicated to those who have lost loved ones and to those who are searching for loved ones .may God be with you all and take this oppertunity to prove Himself to millions of non belivers .. plz pray for eveyone effected. including yourself. remain positive and life will get better

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Boo45

Kinda saddening....Very long poem too.

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Kasai

This was a beautiful piece. The style you used is called free verse. You did an amazing job. You have great potential, keep writing.

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jaderabbit

nice piece.. but isn't the toll abov 80,000 now? either way very sad

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