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    Arrow beyond the death........{relating to the tsunami }

    yall this isnt suppose to rhyme so ..yeah ..more of a freeform hope ya like!!
    this is relating to those killed in the resenr tsunami

    beyond the death

    the hurt .
    the pain .
    the death.
    you hear it
    and you see it
    but what else is their
    after the deaths
    what is left?
    you may say"nothing"
    which is somewhat true
    but not completely
    what is left?
    people
    some in pain
    because of injury
    some in pain
    because of loss
    some in pian
    because they cannot protect
    those who have died
    those who are dying
    and those who will die
    you see pictures
    destruction
    devestation
    death
    but what is left?
    the people who have lost loved ones
    sisters
    brothers
    mothers
    fathers
    cousins
    aunts
    uncles
    friends
    the list of death
    80,000
    the list effected
    millions
    my piont is?
    though many have died
    if has effected nearly everyone
    if 1 dies
    everyone that ever knew that person is effected
    its sad
    so many deaths and so many effected
    what is left behind?
    few belongings
    distant memories
    broken hearts

    this is dedicated to those who have lost loved ones and to those who are searching for loved ones .may God be with you all and take this oppertunity to prove Himself to millions of non belivers .. plz pray for eveyone effected. including yourself. remain positive and life will get better
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    Kinda saddening....Very long poem too.

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    This was a beautiful piece. The style you used is called free verse. You did an amazing job. You have great potential, keep writing.
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    nice piece.. but isn't the toll abov 80,000 now? either way very sad
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