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is backkk | yall this isnt suppose to rhyme so ..yeah ..more of a freeform hope ya like!! this is relating to those killed in the resenr tsunami beyond the death the hurt . the pain . the death. you hear it and you see it but what else is their after the deaths what is left? you may say"nothing" which is somewhat true but not completely what is left? people some in pain because of injury some in pain because of loss some in pian because they cannot protect those who have died those who are dying and those who will die you see pictures destruction devestation death but what is left? the people who have lost loved ones sisters brothers mothers fathers cousins aunts uncles friends the list of death 80,000 the list effected millions my piont is? though many have died if has effected nearly everyone if 1 dies everyone that ever knew that person is effected its sad so many deaths and so many effected what is left behind? few belongings distant memories broken hearts this is dedicated to those who have lost loved ones and to those who are searching for loved ones .may God be with you all and take this oppertunity to prove Himself to millions of non belivers .. plz pray for eveyone effected. including yourself. remain positive and life will get better
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![]() ![]() Credits: 1,490 | This was a beautiful piece. The style you used is called free verse. You did an amazing job. You have great potential, keep writing.
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![]() ![]() Credits: 7,404 | nice piece.. but isn't the toll abov 80,000 now? either way very sad
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