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    Bittersweet Wings (poem)

    All my life I wished to fly
    To soar into the stary sky
    Flying through the entire day
    To soar so very far away
    One day I went all numb;
    and finally my wings had come!
    But suddenly I felt all sore,
    I didn't want them anymore
    Even the wings that take me off my feet...
    Is everything so bittersweet?
    Everything comes with a cost
    Must something always be lost?
    Thinking of the time we kissed
    I saw his face come through the mist
    So shocked that I could barely speak
    Angelic tears rolled down my cheek
    He reached out to grasp my hand,
    But he stood solidly on land
    No match was he for wings so great
    I knew that it was far to late
    To save me from my one true wish
    That pulled me into the heavenly abyss.
    But know I would've given up these wings of mine
    Just to see you one more time
    "I never stopped loving you, I just stopped letting it show."
    -Unknown

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    very nicely writen ...nice that you could keep a rhyme scheme and keep the poem flowing to a closure is very respectible!! good job here and good piont made throughtout the poem!!

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    kool poem, it has everything that a good poem should have keep it up!!!

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    i liked that peom

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