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![]() ![]() Credits: 210 | Bittersweet Wings (poem) All my life I wished to fly To soar into the stary sky Flying through the entire day To soar so very far away One day I went all numb; and finally my wings had come! But suddenly I felt all sore, I didn't want them anymore Even the wings that take me off my feet... Is everything so bittersweet? Everything comes with a cost Must something always be lost? Thinking of the time we kissed I saw his face come through the mist So shocked that I could barely speak Angelic tears rolled down my cheek He reached out to grasp my hand, But he stood solidly on land No match was he for wings so great I knew that it was far to late To save me from my one true wish That pulled me into the heavenly abyss. But know I would've given up these wings of mine Just to see you one more time
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is backkk | very nicely writen ...nice that you could keep a rhyme scheme and keep the poem flowing to a closure is very respectible!! good job here and good piont made throughtout the poem!! smile youve got frenches!!
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