very deep.
I awake,
my eyes open,
but they percieve,
only darkness.
light cannot pierce,
this dark shell,
that ensnares me.
i can't feel,
it's as if i'm not there.
i can't see or feel me.
no one cares either.
friends pass me,
and cannot see me,
but i sense thier passing,
but cannot feel them.
nothingness...
blackness...
i'm deaf to thier sounds,
and blinded too.
i scream and hear nothing.
i am muted by,
this black cave.
i cry and no tears come.
i cannot even get,
the satisfaction,
of brokenness.
i cannot even feel,
the bed i know,
i was once in.
when i slept,
feels long ago,
gone....
that time was forever ago,
and now i am nothing.
no sound.
no sight.
no feeling.
no touch.
no friends now.
no time.
no dreams.
no happiness.
only one hope left...
and it's fading...
slowly...
fading...
into...
...
the...
...
dark...
...
ness...............
......
......
......
forgive.... me............ By Justin McCormick (K' Heart)
"To never know me, is to never understand me.... So who now can say they know me, not anyone I know......."
Far be it for me to be anything special, when the only special thing I desire with me, is the special person I share my gifts with.
very deep.
-Just another green eyed angel, distorted by mans love for hate-|THE INFAMOUS CHEETOS OVERLORD||IceNineKills|
nicely written....very nice
Wow you live up to your name. Very good work.![]()
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i like it....very nice poem.....i can relate to the feelings
white....it seems so pure.....but in reality......it becomes whatever blends with it....
Nice choice of title - the poem on the whole conveys the very thought of the blackness, the nothingness and the emptiness felt. Even to one who is not familiar with the feeling, the strong and powerful words makes the reader acquainted with it. I felt trapped somehow just by reading it.
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