Burning

*vb0xn4rd* · Mar 04, 2005, 07:18 PM

Burning - by Derek Edmonds

Mind firing
Body burning
Everything tingling
Ears ringing
World swirling
Eyes swimming
Feet shuffling
Hands twitching
Heart pumping

It's all too much to handle

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Okay, boys and girls. Who can say "0xn4rd has ingested too much caffiene in too short a period of time?"

steelangelanna · Mar 05, 2005, 07:56 AM

i larve it derek!

Shade/K' Heart · Mar 05, 2005, 08:34 PM

Nice! Very cool. And even if you did get too much caffine.... you still wrote well. (If ever there was a plus for too much of anything that is.....)

Mar 04, 2005, 07:18 PM	#1 (permalink)
vb0xn4rd VISITING Join Date: Jan 2005 Posts: 127 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 160	Burning Burning - by Derek Edmonds Mind firing Body burning Everything tingling Ears ringing World swirling Eyes swimming Feet shuffling Hands twitching Heart pumping It's all too much to handle ---- Okay, boys and girls. Who can say "0xn4rd has ingested too much caffiene in too short a period of time?"
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steelangelanna Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: in a magical guild of fairies. Posts: 102 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 948	i larve it derek! __________________
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Shade/K' Heart Otaku Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: I am always near... Posts: 413 Thanks: 10 Thanked 10 Times in 8 Posts Credits: 3,204	Nice! Very cool. And even if you did get too much caffine.... you still wrote well. (If ever there was a plus for too much of anything that is.....) __________________ Far be it for me to be anything special, when the only special thing I desire with me, is the special person I share my gifts with.
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