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    chains{P}

    you hold me back
    you brought them
    ropes
    chains
    string
    locks
    cabled
    anything you could hold me bac with
    youve encased me
    and now i look
    across the lake
    acroos a feild
    and i see im
    but you wont let me go
    and i look closer
    youve done it to him too
    ubt wat you dont know is
    even thoguh you hold us back
    i see him clearly
    and see his lips move
    he says
    "i love you"
    and i say it bac
    the chains fall off
    loosly to the ground
    the locks break open
    and suddenly
    you are right next to me
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    Nice poem, but work on the spelling and grammer. And I saw one line made no sense.
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    i like this poem a lot but yes, as wrath said, it's a bit hard to understand... work on spelling and it will be 100 times better

    "Dim vales- and shadowy floods-
    And cloudy-looking woods,
    Whose forms we can't discover
    For the tears that drip all over!
    Huge moons there wax and wane-
    Again- again- again-"



    Edgar Allan Poe

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    yeah yall sry about spellin!! i got 3 calls between typing it and forgot to proofread!!lol sowwy sowwy sowwy!!
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