Sweet. Great use of metaphors here......nice work
i take a look
around
not anywhere imparticular
just to see where i am
i decide to take a walk
go to the sreetcorner
sign says
hells dr.
and
confusion blvd.
not sure where to turn
i walk down confusion blvd.
where natrually
i dont understand anything
im lost and dont know where to turn
where are you
when i need you most?
your gone again
where?
i dont know
no way to find you now
better come get me
before something happens
something ELSE happens.....
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Sweet. Great use of metaphors here......nice work
thank u very much!! see ya in the forums!!
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nice one...
Your poem got me confused as well about what you're trying to say...? And it kinda reminded me of Greenday's "Boulevard of Broken Dreams" for some reason. :S Oh well.
The chick has done it again, nice one.
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