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that is cool but sad I dont like sad poems
I see myself as a bird on a wire
resting on the edge of my sanity
Hearing a song play over and over again
Wondering why you have forsaken me
Why have you made me feel unworthy
I see myself between a rock and a hard place
Wondering how I can still love the sight of you
Wondering why I wait for you to accept me
Yet still I wonder what is wrong with me
Do I still love you to my very core?
I see myself riding off into the sunset
Your there on that horse with me
I wonder where we are going
I wonder If I really care
I wonder If I will get hurt again
I see myself as an ant under a microscope
Every one is watching my every move
As I hum the song over in ny mind
"Why have you forsaken me, In your arms forsaken me"
And I wonder if I will get hurt again.
that is cool but sad I dont like sad poems
That was good. It was nice to read. Sad, but nice to read.
Far be it for me to be anything special, when the only special thing I desire with me, is the special person I share my gifts with.
I think many people can relate to the poem's theme, (or maybe not). Anyways, the theme is nicely expressed through the "metaphors", further showing the poet's creativity and originality, which is what a poem really should be about besides showing the poet's heart, which can also be seen in the poem. Nice work of art, but perhaps, can you find a more suitable title for such a wonderful theme, I mean, I love sad poems, and I think yours is great! Maybe you can add more depth to your title to make it more compelling.
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