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    Exclamation crimson rain{P}

    since the last time
    he saw it
    he knew he was destine
    to see it again

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    he saw the green grass
    turn to a burnt black
    he watch them
    fall
    scream
    suffer
    and then finally die
    he watched the beauty
    or architect
    fall and crumble
    and hes one of the few
    that remember
    that know
    that survived
    on the last say
    it rained
    not pure water
    like everyone sees
    he saw it as red drops
    crimson blood drops
    he went back to the place which he came
    days to weeks
    to months to years
    he had the dream of the crimson rain
    and knew he
    would see it again
    he went back
    to the place of crimson rain
    and he became one of
    the fallen
    the screamer
    the sufferer
    and a hand lifted him up
    and crimson rain
    fell down from him

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    they took his address
    and mailed a piece of metal
    on a string
    for his life
    and for
    serving his country
    WWI
    and
    WWII
    this metal was a replacement
    for his life
    because his body couldnt be found
    because it was with God
    in the sky
    the crimson rain
    will always fall
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    good, nice one. I really liked the middle part.
    p.s.
    what happened while i was gone?! there are so many unfamiliar people, lol!
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    Quote Originally Posted by T Elocin
    good, nice one. I really liked the middle part.
    p.s.
    what happened while i was gone?! there are so many unfamiliar people, lol!
    baby i know!! i guess ummer inspired a lot of ppl!!
    keep up with old writers but some of the new guys are pretty good too!!
    especially simple-check out all his you can!! there short but so powerful it makes you want more!!

    thx for comment
    ps:where did you go off to-i got off for a week-then you were gone!!??
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    Quote Originally Posted by animechick
    baby i know!! i guess ummer inspired a lot of ppl!!
    keep up with old writers but some of the new guys are pretty good too!!
    especially simple-check out all his you can!! there short but so powerful it makes you want more!!

    thx for comment
    ps:where did you go off to-i got off for a week-then you were gone!!??
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    well first i got grounded from the computer for a while; then after i was ungrounded my mom said i still couldn't get back on until i finished this really tough project. so..... that took me a bit.
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    hehe yeah that sux!! im grounded off right now...shhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.....dont tell mum!!

    oh and i forgot to put i wrote this because of a WWI AND II book i was reading!!
    tehe

    have a happy day
    with out drinking blood!!

    -ky
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    well, i liked very much and you shall be in a book

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    ahahhaha...poor girl
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