animechick

since the last time
he saw it
he knew he was destine
to see it again

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he saw the green grass
turn to a burnt black
he watch them
fall
scream
suffer
and then finally die
he watched the beauty
or architect
fall and crumble
and hes one of the few
that remember
that know
that survived
on the last say
it rained
not pure water
like everyone sees
he saw it as red drops
crimson blood drops
he went back to the place which he came
days to weeks
to months to years
he had the dream of the crimson rain
and knew he
would see it again
he went back
to the place of crimson rain
and he became one of
the fallen
the screamer
the sufferer
and a hand lifted him up
and crimson rain
fell down from him

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they took his address
and mailed a piece of metal
on a string
for his life
and for
serving his country
WWI
and
WWII
this metal was a replacement
for his life
because his body couldnt be found
because it was with God
in the sky
the crimson rain
will always fall

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T Elocin

good, nice one. I really liked the middle part.
p.s.
what happened while i was gone?! there are so many unfamiliar people, lol!

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Ninrev Sirgem

Ahh...blood!

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animechick

baby i know!! i guess ummer inspired a lot of ppl!!
keep up with old writers but some of the new guys are pretty good too!!
especially simple-check out all his you can!! there short but so powerful it makes you want more!!

thx for comment
ps:where did you go off to-i got off for a week-then you were gone!!??

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T Elocin

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well first i got grounded from the computer for a while; then after i was ungrounded my mom said i still couldn't get back on until i finished this really tough project. so..... that took me a bit.

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animechick

hehe yeah that sux!! im grounded off right now...shhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.....dont tell mum!!

oh and i forgot to put i wrote this because of a WWI AND II book i was reading!!
tehe

have a happy day
with out drinking blood!!

-ky

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tak

well, i liked very much and you shall be in a book

Ninrev Sirgem

ahahhaha...poor girl

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