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    Talking The Dance (Poetic Story)

    I was a very BAD boy last night (4/14/05), and so this happened. Just playing, but I did have fun, and that's all that matters. The reason I say I was bad.... well read on my friends.... This is...

    "The Dance"



    Stressed out,
    I go into the night,
    not expecting anything at all.
    I get to a club,
    the party's just starting,
    and 30 minutes go by,
    with no action.
    No one in,
    the hip hop place,
    of the club,
    and it's sad today.
    the DJ sucks,
    playing bad music,
    so I request a song.
    A song plays,
    sux but has good beat,
    to i get up,
    and make my way to the floor.
    i dance my heart out,
    doing moves none other can do,
    because i'll disabled like that,
    and flexible too.
    MY song hits,
    and I get into it.
    now a crowd is brought,
    and i now can move.
    30 minutes pass and i finally rest.
    get 10 minutes off,
    then hit it again.
    no crowd till i begin,
    then they come like sheep,
    to see my Xtreme moves again.
    i do this once more,
    then rest and go back,
    and this is where it gets interesting.
    "she" comes and dances,
    and runs away,
    and i think nothing of it,
    till again later,
    she comes my way.
    "she" eyes me down,
    and i dancingly advance...
    i shake and turn,
    my back to her.
    she moves in,
    and again i turn.
    she turns her back,
    and i place hands on her side.
    i feel the music,
    it's flow and her beat.
    we become rythmic,
    and move to the music.
    such a beautiful girl,
    couldn't be with me like this.
    we are one,
    and old friends watch in disbelief.
    "How can such a nobody,
    get a girl like her...?"
    she leaves soon,
    as do i,
    since i didn't see her again.
    so another night ends,
    me being the show.
    i got respect,
    i got love,
    now i just wish i could see "her" once more............


    Justin McCormick (K' Heart) "Based on actual events..."

    To the blonde haired girl, with glasses, white tank top, tight jeans, and being cute as hell.... may our paths cross again soon...... Thanks for the dance!

    Far be it for me to be anything special, when the only special thing I desire with me, is the special person I share my gifts with.

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    AWWWWW......ISN THAT CCUUUUTE....LOL...man...sounds like something if u ask me...shoulda asked for her number and where she lived =P....sounds like u had a great time...i like the poem too ^-^

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    I know it... but I didn't think she was going to leave so soon. Maybe some other time. (My luck, sighs.)

    Far be it for me to be anything special, when the only special thing I desire with me, is the special person I share my gifts with.

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    Youve missed a chick???? mann thats dumb.

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    AWWW..... nice. I wish you luck to the blond haired girl with glasses, white tank top, tight jeans and being cute as hell. Yeah, may your paths cross again. But hell, you let that girl just... GO!!! That's pretty dumb of you.

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    ...my luck

    Quote Originally Posted by deidre_the_goddess
    AWWW..... nice. I wish you luck to the blond haired girl with glasses, white tank top, tight jeans and being cute as hell. Yeah, may your paths cross again. But hell, you let that girl just... GO!!! That's pretty dumb of you.
    Not like I had a choice. She slipped out mid song and left. I didn't see her leave and didn't know she left until AFTER I got done. Oh well... My luck I guess. I've never been good with people, period! I'm losing people left and right, and sometimes I'm afraid of what else might happen... my luck I guess...

    Far be it for me to be anything special, when the only special thing I desire with me, is the special person I share my gifts with.

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    i like it very much...hope you meet your girl again...not only in ur dreams...
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    Wow, nice poem. Sounds like your a pretty good dancer! I like to dance; its fun. but I'm WAY to shy to dance in public; I get embarrased easily. lol. good poem; hope you meet her again

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