Dancing (poem) "I can dance all night."
"my body tires out before me."
that's what i say,
and then i go on dancing...
the reason...
i wish for someone,
to peer thier eyes on me.
i dance my heart out,
hoping that someone,
might take a liking to me.
that i might find a girl,
for whom might stare in wonder,
at how i can go so long,
go so fast,
go so much,
and never give out,
and never give up.
i do these things,
with all my heart,
and all my soul,
hoping.
they can't do what i can,
they can only try,
because of my condition...
but no sad stories now,
just the dance...
and the music hit,
and off i go.
what i wouldn't give for love.
(sigh)
By: Justin McCormick (K' Heart)
Far be it for me to be anything special, when the only special thing I desire with me, is the special person I share my gifts with.
This seems like a kind of yearning which you want..? Probably you're wanting some girl to take notice of you? Anyway, very creative! Wow dancing. :] Nice poem. Not so sad, a little comical ( I don't know why, when I read 'dancing' I was reminded of Grease; Dirty Dancing.)
:] Nice! :]
How do you do this, day by day, you do amaze me, all these poems of yours are great.
youve done it again, such great work that you have. nice, keep em comin
that good dude I like that
Never read a poem quite like yours it is very subtile but not without it's sense of a true meaning.........................
DEEP man DEEP.
to daily pain, is to daily write pain.... to daily be blessed is to daily show skill... to daily endure is to daily strengthen, and to daily be joyed is to move on....
Not bad for just making it up... but that's just what i do, i create. Somehow.... i've been blessed.... (don't ask why, I have NO CLUE!!!) Thanks to all who enjoy my writings. (K' Heart)
Far be it for me to be anything special, when the only special thing I desire with me, is the special person I share my gifts with.
cool, nice poem. you always surprised me with your poems.
I like it...
Last edited by deidre_the_goddess; Apr 23, 2005 at 05:44 AM.
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