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    Dear You.. [P]

    Dear you,

    Where were you at my most needed time?

    When my soul was fading away,

    And my mind breaking?

    Dear you,

    Why were you never around,

    When the wounds and bruises were tattooed on my body,

    When the crying was endless and the blood would never stop flowing?

    Dear you,

    Even though you're alive and healty,

    Do you realize my pain and suffering?

    Do you see my throat cracking?

    Dear you,

    I will always love you...

    ...As my father.

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    very deep and emotional. I really feel this one, good show.

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    so...good... keep up the goodness
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    Nice one D

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    "WoW" it felt like my "past" but my is defferent my father he hate me from the very bone [no offence] i just trying to share my feeling and this poem touch me and very emotional good work ,>_<,

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    This reminds me of my childhood. Early in my childhood, I was afraid of my father. He was always working and only there half of the time, because of work. We may have had a lot, but I was robbed of my father, and often he was angry because of work. I've only, within the past 5 years, learned to be around him. I'm 22 now. Now, I know I am him... just younger and with more spunk, LOL. I love the poem. It made me remember that the bad things can change into the good. Thanks for that too.

    Far be it for me to be anything special, when the only special thing I desire with me, is the special person I share my gifts with.

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