Death

steelangelanna · Feb 23, 2005, 03:06 PM

Rotting corpse in a feild,
maggots crawling all around.
A nest the flies have made in mine eyes,
oh how great my soul does dispise.
The sun slowing burning away my flesh,
as i lay my soul to rest.

T Elocin · Feb 24, 2005, 09:54 AM

Nice poem. I like the rymes. But it gives me a creepy image though.
Great poem.

steelangelanna · Feb 24, 2005, 06:35 PM

thanks! -cheery smile- i love death! -^^-

*vb0xn4rd* · Feb 24, 2005, 08:16 PM

Y'know, you should get Kyle (the one at skool, as if that weren't obvious) to do an illustration based on this poem. He'll either make it dark and dreary, or ridiculous and hilarious, but either way it will turn out awesome.

steelangelanna · Feb 26, 2005, 08:11 AM

mmtay. ill save this poem then and give it to him. -giggles- i love Kyle!

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steelangelanna Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: in a magical guild of fairies. Posts: 102 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 948	Death Rotting corpse in a feild, maggots crawling all around. A nest the flies have made in mine eyes, oh how great my soul does dispise. The sun slowing burning away my flesh, as i lay my soul to rest. __________________
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Feb 24, 2005, 09:54 AM	#2 (permalink)
T Elocin Newbie Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Virginia, US Posts: 92 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 210	Nice poem. I like the rymes. But it gives me a creepy image though. Great poem.
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Feb 24, 2005, 06:35 PM	#3 (permalink)
steelangelanna Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: in a magical guild of fairies. Posts: 102 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 948	thanks! -cheery smile- i love death! -^^- __________________
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Feb 24, 2005, 08:16 PM	#4 (permalink)
vb0xn4rd VISITING Join Date: Jan 2005 Posts: 127 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 160	Y'know, you should get Kyle (the one at skool, as if that weren't obvious) to do an illustration based on this poem. He'll either make it dark and dreary, or ridiculous and hilarious, but either way it will turn out awesome.
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Feb 26, 2005, 08:11 AM	#5 (permalink)
steelangelanna Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: in a magical guild of fairies. Posts: 102 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 948	mmtay. ill save this poem then and give it to him. -giggles- i love Kyle! __________________
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