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    Despair

    Despair
    February 14, 2005
    by: Silver Nightingale
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    As my last leaf falls,
    I could not help but tremble
    As cold winter comes...


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    "There are times when one could do nothing to escape fate. During such times, it is best to simply succumb to it and hope for the best."

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    Nice one. So short yet so emotional....

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    This is the first attempt at a haiku that I've seen in a long, long time that actually has the syllabic pattern correct.

    It shows good depth beyond it's three lines.
    Clan? What Clan?
    I'm the Master. I need no Clan.

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