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    Smile Doom and Togetherness... (Poem)

    This poem, like mostof mine... more like all of mine, is based on true events....



    now what can these two things,
    Doom and Togetherness,
    have in common you may ask me.
    well, just keep reading...
    my father and me,
    sitting at a computer
    he's asking for advice,
    and i say "turn there."
    a few shots of his shotgun,
    and down go a few more demons.
    he's up to his top form.
    almost 50 and yet a gamer,
    playing the old school,
    version of Doom.
    So he takes on,
    all these baddies,
    and comes out on top,
    most all the time.
    and when he's in trouble...
    "JUSTIN!!" I hear him yell.
    it could be hours later,
    before we seperate from the screen.
    and then he dies,
    or saves the game once more,
    before giving up,
    or entering another door.
    he'll end it for tonight.
    Doom saved a brokenness in me,
    because it brought me back,
    to my dad again.



    By Justin McCormick (K' Heart) "I call this quality time... and yes, my dad is a gamer, and he don't know it. He's so old school though which is cool..."

    Far be it for me to be anything special, when the only special thing I desire with me, is the special person I share my gifts with.

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    wow but i wish my dad do that but he hate ever- thing that i like and he get soooo anger about it that's why my mom take over here in america i love america and i met my GF she a JAPANESE its that lucky or what eny-way another great job there buddy

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    I don't get this poem, it seems really complicated. :S

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    Quote Originally Posted by esthered
    I don't get this poem, it seems really complicated. :S

    YEAH, I DIDN'T GET THIS ONE TOO

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    i understand it probably because you have to understand justin first before you understand his writing
    LIFES NOT A GARDEN SO STOP ACTING LIKE A STUPID HOE.

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    Hey Justin good one. I totally understand where you are coming from. And i think its great.
    LOVE LIFE WORK PAIN SARROW AND THE GRACE OF THE ANGELS TO EVERYONE

    always and forever, through pain and sorrow, through love and joy

    A'Karuya (the young warrior)

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