wow, you were good at your *ahem* "suicidal time" very nice![]()
Drowning
Spinning in my head
My world begins to fall...
As my heart starts to sink,
The Lord starts to call...
I drown in my never-ending tears,
the plastics by my side.
I touch and they fade.
Finding myself in a pool of black,
I sink and I sink.
Oxygen depletes,
Tightening my mind,
Lunging for despair.
Do not fight it;
As it will bring you pleasure.
Do not reject it;
As it will end your suffering.
Notes : Just a poem I dug up from my old Diary while I was pretty... *ahem* suicidal. Yeah, but it's all over now. I just realize that I write poems more when I'm depressed. Weird, but true. :S
wow, you were good at your *ahem* "suicidal time" very nice![]()
I won't let this world exist without me! If I die, we all die! / Avatar & Signature by anime_8000.
Yea, he's right thats a good poem!
You sound like me. My emotion is tied to my writing ability. I feel sad, I get a sad poem. You get the picture. Nice poem. I like your work already.
Far be it for me to be anything special, when the only special thing I desire with me, is the special person I share my gifts with.
thats the power!!!
Beautiful. Very powerful and stunnig poem..
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