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    Drowning [P]

    Drowning

    Spinning in my head
    My world begins to fall...
    As my heart starts to sink,
    The Lord starts to call...
    I drown in my never-ending tears,
    the plastics by my side.
    I touch and they fade.
    Finding myself in a pool of black,
    I sink and I sink.
    Oxygen depletes,
    Tightening my mind,
    Lunging for despair.
    Do not fight it;
    As it will bring you pleasure.
    Do not reject it;
    As it will end your suffering.


    Notes : Just a poem I dug up from my old Diary while I was pretty... *ahem* suicidal. Yeah, but it's all over now. I just realize that I write poems more when I'm depressed. Weird, but true. :S

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    Messenger of Despair Hive Hero Champion dark angel swordsman may be famous one day dark angel swordsman may be famous one day dark angel swordsman's Avatar
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    wow, you were good at your *ahem* "suicidal time" very nice
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    Yea, he's right thats a good poem!

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    You sound like me. My emotion is tied to my writing ability. I feel sad, I get a sad poem. You get the picture. Nice poem. I like your work already.

    Far be it for me to be anything special, when the only special thing I desire with me, is the special person I share my gifts with.

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    thats the power!!!

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    Beautiful. Very powerful and stunnig poem..

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