Dyin to liv in this world...(dis suks my sis made it...)
Why r we dieing to live if we're jus livin to die
y r the soldiers dieing-
in this world of G. Bush
y r we all crying
becuz of all the pain
y do we hav to
go live in this world of pain?
Nothin in this world is even fair
non of us r happy but in a way we may be
if luv is goin so wak
then y do u still try
so y r we dieing to liv if we're jus livin to die...
The words that are chopped up are very annoying. is there some sort of theme behind it? Like you can write like Bush?? Also, the only thing that was bad about it was the missing word-parts. If they were added in, it would be very awsome.
**sorry if it sounds rude, just being a critic.