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    Emotional Day (Poem)

    Today...
    mixed emotions.
    deep sadness and depression,
    over a loss.
    then null from being sad,
    feeling as if I'm out of body.
    then happiness,
    when i found an interest in me,
    and my poems.
    then scared,
    because i can't start a life,
    of my very own.
    broken heart,
    broken soul,
    broken bank account,
    and broken life.
    it seems i always fail,
    even though i'll never stop,
    never quit.
    i'll never give up,
    on the one's i love,
    near or far.
    my spirit pains...
    of this day.

    God... be with those who I care most about.....

    By: Justin McCormick (K' Heart) "The spirit never dies... just the body."

    Far be it for me to be anything special, when the only special thing I desire with me, is the special person I share my gifts with.

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    kool peom and keep up ok

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    you always say that.... lol. Just kidding... so long as you mean it.

    Far be it for me to be anything special, when the only special thing I desire with me, is the special person I share my gifts with.

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    hey hon..i know that when you write about feelings..its all true so dont be sad..i dont like knowing you're depressed...brighten up okay? but anyways the poem is really good..just like all your other ones
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    Yo if I could cry dawg I would right now. I want to cry, but the tears won't come out. PLZ keep in mind, that ur poetry will take u places.
    You should stop talking about your dreams, and start making them.

    http://kuv319.tumblr.com/

    There is something so human in the desire to never give up, while at the same time, never giving it your all?

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    y wouldn't I I love this guy's poetry, (Note I am a male, but I ain't gay aight???????? I'm just emotional at times.................
    You should stop talking about your dreams, and start making them.

    http://kuv319.tumblr.com/

    There is something so human in the desire to never give up, while at the same time, never giving it your all?

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