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    Ending of the begining / a poem by brent

    Ending of the begining

    As I watch the sun go down,I think of u,
    As I watch the waves hit the beach I think of u,
    All I can do now is think of u,

    I cant consentrate,
    My mind is else where,
    Like a song stuck in my head,
    I cant get u out,

    Ur voice,its melody,
    Calms my soul,
    Ur touch is like a fire that melts my cold heart,

    Ive been locked away!,
    Nvr to again see the light of day,
    Till I met u,I couldn’t dream of love,

    But sadly this is where our story ends,
    And soon a new shall begin,
    U and I must move on!,
    This is no sappy love song,

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    kool peom and you need to chance the poem color

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    nice poem dude!!! you should better change the font color!!!

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