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    Escape From Reality [P]

    Escape From Reality

    Running through the mazes of her mind,

    She finds no exit from this world of foolishness.

    Seeping into her created world;

    Her fantasy.

    A glowing smile on her face,

    Only to be awaken by a haunting reality.

    It pounds inside her head.

    She wants to escape.

    As the wounds open,

    The blood drips.

    Laughing, smiling;

    Behing the tear-stained face.

    The pain is pleasure,

    The tears have disappeared;

    As she slips into unconciousness.

    Her world welcoming her warmly with open arms.

    As angels dance with a sad soft tuen.

    She enters, never to return to reality ever again.

    She laughs in glee;

    When she finally escapes.

    Notes : Well, this was a pretty personal poem for me to publish, but I was being mean and wanted to spread my sadness all over (Just kidding!). Well, this poem was something I wrote while I was cutting myself and once before I got sent to emergency dpt. I just wanted to see how you guys thought of it. :] Lol, and don't worry, I'm not so psycho anymore.

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    youre really giving my fingers a workout today. very nice ^^
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    Nice one, I like it, too.

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    Great nice job, good describing.

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    nice one,
    one question
    is that your way of expressing your sadness?!!
    ^_^

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    Quote Originally Posted by deidre_the_goddess
    nice one,
    one question
    is that your way of expressing your sadness?!!
    ^_^
    LOL. Yes, apparently, it is. :]

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    So nice. It's very superbly written, great stuff here, i mean that.

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    "WoW" that one great but doing that hurtting your self is not the anwers but "one thing" what help you to pull your self up beside doing your poem

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