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    evaluate my story...

    Title:
    I Love You... NOT!!!

    Story:
    Ily Joshua is a 16 year old playboy who doesn't know anything about love. One day, after breaking up with his girlfriend "Iris", Ily felt a sudden urge to fall in love to every "FEMALE" he comes face to face with. This feeling however fades away, after a kiss or once the "FEMALE" is out of his sight. Ily, trying to escape the feeling, tried to run away with his eyes closed, and as he was running away, he suddenly bumped to the honor student of his class "Flow Reindeer", but what surprising tho, Ily didn't fall in love with Flow... What could this mean? Could Flow be a...?

    (P.S. Sows if the story preview is a little shaky, it's the best i can think about for now)


    "Tama-chan! "

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    it has a good story for a preview
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    is it gonna be serious or somewhat comedic??

    'Cause you give me something / That makes me scared, alright / This could be nothing / But I'm willing to give it a try / Please give me something
    'Cause someday I might call you from my heart

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    Ping pong...... pong..... brmmmmm. Magic Old wise man say good story; bad character name... FLow reindeer is the only name that's need's changed's. Definitly a comedy, but maybe with a ton of love triangles . Love octagon's .
    Yeah you have my attention can't wait to read the first volume.
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    Sounds interesting.

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    Hmm... why does this sound like the countless other pervertish comedies out there? Oh, 'cuz it follows the same story principles. Bah.

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