evaluate my story...

Tem · Dec 14, 2004, 07:42 PM

Title:
I Love You... NOT!!!

Story:
Ily Joshua is a 16 year old playboy who doesn't know anything about love. One day, after breaking up with his girlfriend "Iris", Ily felt a sudden urge to fall in love to every "FEMALE" he comes face to face with. This feeling however fades away, after a kiss or once the "FEMALE" is out of his sight. Ily, trying to escape the feeling, tried to run away with his eyes closed, and as he was running away, he suddenly bumped to the honor student of his class "Flow Reindeer", but what surprising tho, Ily didn't fall in love with Flow... What could this mean? Could Flow be a...?

(P.S. Sows if the story preview is a little shaky, it's the best i can think about for now)

*serge2005* · Dec 14, 2004, 07:55 PM

it has a good story for a preview

*Legend* · Dec 14, 2004, 09:07 PM

is it gonna be serious or somewhat comedic??

*jaderabbit* · Dec 14, 2004, 09:15 PM

Ping pong...... pong..... brmmmmm. Magic Old wise man say good story; bad character name... FLow reindeer is the only name that's need's changed's. Definitly a comedy, but maybe with a ton of love triangles

. Love octagon's .
Yeah you have my attention can't wait to read the first volume.

DarkSwordsLady · Dec 15, 2004, 06:08 AM

Sounds interesting.

Eriadd · Dec 15, 2004, 08:46 AM

Hmm... why does this sound like the countless other pervertish comedies out there? Oh, 'cuz it follows the same story principles. Bah.

Dec 14, 2004, 07:42 PM	#1 (permalink)
Tem Otaku Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Seattle, WA Posts: 136 Thanks: 4 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	evaluate my story... Title: I Love You... NOT!!! Story: Ily Joshua is a 16 year old playboy who doesn't know anything about love. One day, after breaking up with his girlfriend "Iris", Ily felt a sudden urge to fall in love to every "FEMALE" he comes face to face with. This feeling however fades away, after a kiss or once the "FEMALE" is out of his sight. Ily, trying to escape the feeling, tried to run away with his eyes closed, and as he was running away, he suddenly bumped to the honor student of his class "Flow Reindeer", but what surprising tho, Ily didn't fall in love with Flow... What could this mean? Could Flow be a...? (P.S. Sows if the story preview is a little shaky, it's the best i can think about for now) __________________ "Tama-chan! "
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Dec 14, 2004, 07:55 PM	#2 (permalink)
serge2005 anime/manga/gamer otaku Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: arkansas Posts: 271 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	it has a good story for a preview __________________ I am the fire that light your wood. I'm the thunder that lights you night. I'm the wind that keeps you cool. are you wondering who I am? I'm the great wizard serge http://bahamutpheonix.7.forumer.com/index.php please join this site if you like any type of games
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Dec 14, 2004, 09:07 PM	#3 (permalink)
Legend Legendary Otaku Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: Sharks Territory Posts: 4,763 Thanks: 65 Thanked 67 Times in 61 Posts	is it gonna be serious or somewhat comedic?? __________________ 'Cause you give me something / That makes me scared, alright / This could be nothing / But I'm willing to give it a try / Please give me something 'Cause someday I might call you from my heart
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Dec 14, 2004, 09:15 PM	#4 (permalink)
jaderabbit Cheetos Overlord Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: The World Posts: 3,674 Thanks: 1 Thanked 5 Times in 4 Posts	Ping pong...... pong..... brmmmmm. Magic Old wise man say good story; bad character name... FLow reindeer is the only name that's need's changed's. Definitly a comedy, but maybe with a ton of love triangles . Love octagon's . Yeah you have my attention can't wait to read the first volume. __________________ -Just another green eyed angel, distorted by mans love for hate- \|THE INFAMOUS\|The Host\|Twilight Series\|Twilight Movie\|IceNineKills\|
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Dec 15, 2004, 06:08 AM	#5 (permalink)
DarkSwordsLady Newbie Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: England Posts: 1 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Sounds interesting.
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Dec 15, 2004, 08:46 AM	#6 (permalink)
Eriadd The Antagonist Join Date: Nov 2004 Posts: 1,922 Thanks: 2 Thanked 3 Times in 3 Posts	Hmm... why does this sound like the countless other pervertish comedies out there? Oh, 'cuz it follows the same story principles. Bah.
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