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    Evermore in the Wind (poem)

    Love is like a flower
    Spring is like the breeze

    When the wind blew
    You held me,
    Safe and warm.
    And in those seconds
    I knew I'd love you

    Evermore.


    poem by T Elocin

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    I love comments! Please write me some! Even if you don't like it.

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    I love the images that were created in my head while reading this. That's one thing that makes me like any written work. Nice job. It's simple but says a lot.

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    Yes the words come across clear, that ur in love
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    Thanks a lot for the commplements! !!


    ...What! I'm not in love!...Am I?!.........awww crap!
    Last edited by T Elocin; Feb 04, 2005 at 05:41 PM.

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    Touching poem. really nice stuff

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