for every tear
ive cried over you
you could save a lake
for every day
ive lived without you
ive cut deeper
i think you gave me the knife
for every moment
ive thought of you
if they were all together
and could use them to go bac in time
i could meet jesus
the first time he came
H E L L O,
i dont know about me, but for some reason when poeple didnt leave me comments i felt like unheard,
But let me tell you, IF you ever need and ear, ill be here .
i think you wrote well, and you gave me what i wanted to hear.
you never seem to stop shining.
Quite agreeing with Simple, the more you write, the more you start to shine. Keep up the good work!
wow thx lots simple!! helps to know someone can hear me!!
and thx kikinaki helps to know ppl care
kool peom and keep up with the good work
kool poem, keep it up!!!!
thanks everyone!! te he i can always look here for encouragement