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**animechick** · May 18, 2005 07:07 PM

for every tear
ive cried over you
you could save a lake
a river
the ocean
for every day
ive lived without you
ive cut deeper
and deeper
and deeper
one time
i think you gave me the knife
for every moment
ive thought of you
if they were all together
and could use them to go bac in time
i could meet jesus
the first time he came

**simple** · May 19, 2005 01:28 AM

H E L L O,

i dont know about me, but for some reason when poeple didnt leave me comments i felt like unheard,

But let me tell you, IF you ever need and ear, ill be here .

i think you wrote well, and you gave me what i wanted to hear.

you never seem to stop shining.

-simple

**!Kikinaki** · May 19, 2005 08:53 AM

Quite agreeing with Simple, the more you write, the more you start to shine. Keep up the good work!

**animechick** · May 19, 2005 08:16 PM

wow thx lots simple!! helps to know someone can hear me!!
and thx kikinaki helps to know ppl care

**tak** · Jun 01, 2005 03:15 PM

kool peom and keep up with the good work

**Nameless** · Jun 01, 2005 03:25 PM

nice poem. well done.

**ketaro** · Jun 01, 2005 03:31 PM

kool poem, keep it up!!!!

**animechick** · Jun 01, 2005 07:45 PM

thanks everyone!! te he i can always look here for encouragement

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