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    Eyes Turned Downward... (Poem)

    At this moment,
    Your working on a poem for me.
    Your love,
    The one you want for the rest of your life.
    You looking at your paper,
    And working on this for me…
    And I’m trying to write,
    A poem too…
    I am typing, when I see you face.
    Eyes turned downward,
    Looking at your words.
    They don’t make sense to you yet,
    But I know deep down,
    That they will once it’s all done.
    I look at your downward glare,
    And I see you working on it.
    Soon after, you send it IM style.
    And ask me what I think.
    Just like you… it’s perfect.
    As you finish one last line.
    I’ll always enjoy seeing you work,
    With your eyes turned downward,
    Thinking of me….

    By Justin McCormick (K' Heart)

    Far be it for me to be anything special, when the only special thing I desire with me, is the special person I share my gifts with.

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    one day we will work on a poem together, but the poem you can't write, for its a poem of our love for each other. Our love is so strong that you can't put it into words. I LOVE YOU.
    that is the easiest way to say it. Amandra Berogan ( Rose Petal)
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    You's Trollin Pro Leafblower Champion, Helicopter Champion ketaro is making a name for themselves ketaro is making a name for themselves ketaro's Avatar
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    Good for you dudes. lol good luck.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    Like ketaro said, good luck, and a nice poem .

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    Wow that was so cute.

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    dude, i dont care what anyone else says, your work is always serious from heart, you have a lot goin on? i can usualy read feeling from writing, i hope im on the right track here. its just as good as you put yourself into it i say, this is really good.

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    it's really nice, i like how you described writing a poem, looking at the words but not knowing what they mean yet, it's good..

    "Dim vales- and shadowy floods-
    And cloudy-looking woods,
    Whose forms we can't discover
    For the tears that drip all over!
    Huge moons there wax and wane-
    Again- again- again-"



    Edgar Allan Poe

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