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    fake angel wings (POEM)

    ...ive kept this secret locked away,
    for quite some time now,
    i never wanted to let them go,
    but today's not an ordinary day.

    these fake angel wings,
    gray and pale,
    theyve been kept in the corner,
    tearing me apart.
    they glow without notice,
    no mortal can see,
    but theyll always be with me.

    my guardians try to help,
    but they all fail.
    this power is too much for them,
    and for me.
    tearing me apart they do,
    until that fateful day,
    when all my friends died their seperate ways.

    i had to release them,
    setting my power free,
    i then knew my true destiny.
    and as i slain the darkness,
    my heart still lays dead,
    as i wonder into heaven,
    finally in my place.


    this has to do with light and dark , my story

    by tyler mitchell)(finished 3-11-05, 10:44 50 seconds
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    I guess you're very fond of the eternal battle between light and dark.

    Nice poem DarkAngelSwordsman

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    and get this, light and and dark is the first of 4 books in the ''opposing forces'' series im making
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    that's very nice. the darkness can fight for a long time, but it can't beat the light. Great job!

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    wow that really seemed different from all your other poems...seemed to have more emeotion stirred it there!! nice work ty!!

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    Yeah this one was different, nice poem firelord

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