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    Fake tears

    It just makes me mad
    Makes me see your selfishness
    you believe that being depressed is the new fad
    I admit your life won't be exactly flawless

    You cry over the simplest of things
    whle a 8 year old is orphaned
    taking care of 3 other siblings
    she stays strong never to complain about being burdened

    Or when a man gives up food
    just for his childs diabetes medicine
    He actually has a life thats valued
    And he will suffer through endless famine

    You say your so Depressed
    I say your one sad soul
    Who is blind to the millions oppressed
    And shall never be truly sad untill they have lived in the hellhole
    Just like they have
    A deathless heart alive with greif
    Smiles when it hears of thee
    Whisper now my secret love
    Kiss my lips and rise above

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    very nice.
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    Nice poem, good argument. But, sorry I can't agree with your point. Great poem though.

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    Good, nice poem.

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    This was good, but I think ure being a little too harsh on your friend :]

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    I think you have a certain way of looking negative on certain things, nevertheless you described your feelings well and that made this poem a good one like intented.

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    good poem but some people do have a lot of problems like me or like your friend but you never know
    LIFES NOT A GARDEN SO STOP ACTING LIKE A STUPID HOE.

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    I liked this one I felt the feeling in it and got the shivers.
    LOVE LIFE WORK PAIN SARROW AND THE GRACE OF THE ANGELS TO EVERYONE

    always and forever, through pain and sorrow, through love and joy

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