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Old Sep 17, 2005, 04:42 PM   #1 (permalink)
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fall...

This a poem I wrote. In order to fit with the forum, I suppose a way to bring about conversation is, what kind of feelings do you get in the fall? School starts, the summer ends. What does the fall mean to you or what does it do to you?

I'm curious to see how this topic is not only taken, but moderated. I'm a bit tired of the list of question threads, but not much I can do.

So lets talk about fall.

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Rain.
It's the same.
Cooling my shame.
Lost.
It's a game.
The only one left standing.
It's a shame.
A wet shirt.
Her flowing skirt.
The ideas in my head.
Makes me hurt.
Period.
Dreading senses of being.
Seeing,
The mistakes in my speech,
As I speak.
Blisters on my feet.
Leather shoes of lost souls.
Their faces full of holes.
Memories,
Expecting feelings.
Nothing.
Too in body.
Too in here.
Feeling of away.
Stop cheating,
It can't be yesterday.


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Old Sep 17, 2005, 04:46 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Re: fall...

I like the fall
not too hot, not too cold
windy
can't stand the heat and the sun during the summer
but in the fall, the wind is nice and soothing
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Old Sep 17, 2005, 04:49 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Re: fall...

fall is probably my favourite season. it's so pretty bcuz all the leaves r changing colour. and i like how it starts to get cold, but there r still the days u don't really need a jacket.
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Old Sep 17, 2005, 04:51 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Re: fall...

Interesting how your experience with falls is more directed towards the physical senses.

Then again, the world changes with fall--hurricanes are a good example, leaves fall. I guess I was aiming at something deeper.

Weather wise fall seems warmer the last few years though.

I like the styles and how people cover up more too.
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Old Sep 17, 2005, 04:57 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Re: fall...

I'll allow it, not sure about the other Moderators.

One change I did make, I put the subject first, that way people know what they're talking about first and foremost.
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Old Sep 17, 2005, 04:57 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Re: fall...

We are coming off the tail end of an Ice age
so the weather will continue to get warmer
until the ice caps are done melting

The government said
Quote:
we must do something about this global warming
Wat are they going to do stop the weather they are the truest idiots of all
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Old Sep 17, 2005, 04:58 PM   #7 (permalink)
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Re: fall...

The fall makes me sad. It's when all things start to end. It reminds me that we all die someday. It's just a matter of time. But it also makes me happy. Soon winter will start and it becomes time to stay home and be with family and the ones you love.

I just went real soft didn't I?
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Old Sep 17, 2005, 04:59 PM   #8 (permalink)
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Re: fall...

Meh, I'm going to let the topic slide.

But if people start posting poems just to post poetry, there will be bloodshed.
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Old Sep 17, 2005, 05:53 PM   #9 (permalink)
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Re: fall...

Fall is actually my favorite time of the year, i become more reflective, a bit more relaxed....and my horror mood runs rampant. A heck of a beautiful season.
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Old Sep 17, 2005, 05:59 PM   #10 (permalink)
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Re: fall...

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I'll allow it, not sure about the other Moderators.

One change I did make, I put the subject first, that way people know what they're talking about first and foremost.
Thanks. Actually, I should have thought of that.

I was worried about your opinion because you mentioned poetry should be kept to journals.

At the same time, I was hoping on probing for other fall poetry.

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Old Sep 17, 2005, 06:25 PM   #11 (permalink)
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Re: fall...

finally fall..I get to buy my new jacket, the s.t.a.r.s RPD resident evil jacket to be exact.
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