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    Fallen Angel

    Angel sleeps
    Falling down

    Her name is black
    She lost her wings

    Did something wrong
    Something not allowed

    She loved a human
    And he gave her his love

    But angel sleeps
    and fals down

    No one cares
    She is fallen now

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    Pretty imagery.... there is a book called Wormwood that kinda has that plot to it... have you read it? if not, you should it's really good lol

    "Dim vales- and shadowy floods-
    And cloudy-looking woods,
    Whose forms we can't discover
    For the tears that drip all over!
    Huge moons there wax and wane-
    Again- again- again-"



    Edgar Allan Poe

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    Quote Originally Posted by RavenMoon13
    Pretty imagery.... there is a book called Wormwood that kinda has that plot to it... have you read it? if not, you should it's really good lol

    Hmmm......i'll check it out. thanx

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    Arrow Sun Bridge

    When the sun makes a bridge with only light,
    Dew and rain are summoned to stand
    In statues of mist, just above land.



    Twists, molds and wrestles the beams,
    Weaving the colors into a seam;
    Sealing the gap of sky and space,
    Then fading away without leaving a trace...



    It's about rainbows if you couldn't tell lol well I hope u guys like, and comment please!



    this is my first posted poem.... hopefully more this week

    "Dim vales- and shadowy floods-
    And cloudy-looking woods,
    Whose forms we can't discover
    For the tears that drip all over!
    Huge moons there wax and wane-
    Again- again- again-"



    Edgar Allan Poe

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    Its a nice poem, great riming but why don't you make your own threads, so people can post replys, I think they wont do it here, well like i said a nice poem.

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    yeh lol i am but i just wanted to see how u liked it first

    "Dim vales- and shadowy floods-
    And cloudy-looking woods,
    Whose forms we can't discover
    For the tears that drip all over!
    Huge moons there wax and wane-
    Again- again- again-"



    Edgar Allan Poe

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