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    FanFic:Info:Inuyasha

    Info:Inuyasha

    Chapter 1

    Full Summery:Kagome and Kikyo were sisters.

    They have been also best friends,they do everything together.What happends when Kikyo meets Inuyasha and wants to impress him?She sends Kagome to get lots of Info out of him so her next meeting will be Perfect

    Kagome woke up and yawned.

    ‘What a weird dream,me,Kagome Higurashi.Meeting a prince charming?Dream on! I don’t fall in love!’Kagome thought.

    “Kagome!Breakfast is ready!”Kikyo called from the kitchen.

    Kikyo and Kagome’s parents died in a car crash when they were 13.

    Their parents gave them loads of money so they’re rich.

    Kagome got dressed and on her way,there was a big photo of her parents.

    “morning,mom,dad.”Kagome said.

    Then she kissed her finger and touched the picture.

    Kagome came down and saw Kikyo making breakfast.

    Kikyo and Kagome made a promise that they would never fall in love.

    Kikyo and Kagome are popular,every guys wants them,but they don’t care.

    Kagome began to eat her breakfast.

    Kikyo asked, “So?Finished your homework,Kagome?”

    “Yup!”Kagome replied cheerfully.

    “Oh my god!We have to go to school,now!”Kikyo yelled as she grabbed her backpack on her way out.

    Kagome did the same and followed.

    Kikyo and Kagome both got in the car and Kagome started the engine.

    “Kagome,put the petal to the metal!”Kikyo said.

    Kagome stepped on the petal.

    HARD.

    “AAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!”Kikyo and Kagome both screamed as the car went really fast.

    Kikyo and Kagome felt something under,like they killed something.

    Kikyo looked and groaned.

    ‘Kagome killed a cat.AGAIN!’Kikyo thought.

    When Kagome and Kikyo got to school,Kagome was greeted by Sango and Ayame and Kikyo was greeted by Kagura and Kanna.

    Kagome and Kikyo headed different directions.

    Kikyo had Math,and Kagome had Science.

    When Kikyo was heading towards her class,she bumped into someone.

    “I’m sorry!”Kikyo sqeaked.

    “That’s alright.I wasn’t watching where I was going.”Inuyasha said.

    Kikyo looked at the person who she bumped into.

    She only could think of one thing, ‘He’s...Perfect.’

    “my name’s Inuyasha,what’s yours?”Inuyasha asked.

    “Kikyo Higurashi.”Kikyo replied.

    “Kikyo,it’s nice to meet you.”Inuyasha said.

    Then the bell rang.

    “look,I got to go to class,see you later,Kikyo.”Inuyasha said as he dashed off to his next class.

    “Inuyasha,I think I’m in love with you...”Kikyo whispered.

    End of Chapter 1!

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    Why that font color?
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    doono lol so what do you think about my fanfic


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    well... its interesting... i don't get the part where she kisses her finger. as you can see, my imagination can only go so far... so why did kagome kissed her finger??? who's finger? btw: kagome and kikyo made a promise not to fall in love with each other? wow lol. well overall its a nice fan fic

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    soon i will post the 2 chapter


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    Wow if you really need criticism here it is, I actually write fanfics so I guess I know what I'm talking about. You really need to flesh it out a bit rather than writting tidbits. Describe the surroundings a little more and don't go so fast. Possibly make the chapter longer and please explain things or you'll leave the reader confused. And for the love of god please don't use that font color >_< Overall it was one of those typical Inuyasha fanfics but all you have to do is work on it more and it can be unique! GOOD LUCK! *thumbs up*

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    i had to high light it in oreder to read T-T next time use a nice bright color

    i liked it
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    Info:Inuyasha.

    Chapter 2

    Kagome was sitting in her seat.

    There was a empty seat beside her.

    No one took that seat,even if they wanted to,because Kagome gave them a death glare.

    The teacher,Ms.Hiro,came in,and announced.

    “Everyone,we got a new transfer student from Osaka.Meet,Inuyasha Taisho.”

    Everyone looked and saw a boy came in.

    He had black hair,brown eyes and was wearing the school uniform like everyone else.

    “Hi,name’s Inuyasha Taisho.”Inuyasha introduced.

    “Inuyasha,have a seat beside.....Ms.Higurashi.”said Ms.Hiro.

    Inuyasha looked at Kagome and thought, ‘Kikyo Higurashi?The girl I met earlier?How can she be so fast when I ran ahead?’

    Inuyasha took a seat beside Kagome and Kagome said, “Hi nice to meet you,my name’s Kagome Higurashi.”

    ‘Kikyo and Kagome Higurashi?Are they sisters?Or twin sisters?’Inuyasha thought.

    “Well,today,we’re going to dissect frogs today!”Ms.Hiro announced.

    Kagome and Inuyasha groaned with everyone else.

    Ms.Hiro ignored it.

    ‘This is just plain wrong!’Kagome thought.

    ‘This is so NOT cool.....’Inuyasha thought.

    After dissecting frogs,Kagome asked Inuyasha, “Can I see your schedule,Inuyasha?”

    Inuyasha shrugged and handed his schedule.

    Kagome read and said, “You got the same classes as me!C’mon!Let’s go to gym!”

    Inuyasha and Kagome headed towards the gymnasium.....

    “Ok,everyone,today we’re doing volleyball!It’s one V.S one!”Mr.Sotom announced.

    “Kikyo and Kagome,my best players,go and show some stuff!”Mr.Sotom yelled.

    “Yes sir.”They both said.

    Kikyo looked through the crowd and saw Inuyasha.

    She was so distracted that Kagome served and had got a point.

    ‘What’s wrong with Kikyo?!’Kagome thought.

    ‘Maybe this will get her attention!’Kagome thought as she served at Kikyo’s head.

    It bounced on her head and Kagome got a another point.

    Kikyo saw and Kagome was winning.

    ‘Oh,no.I was distracted by Inuyasha that I didn’t even saw Kagome served the ball.Twice!’Kikyo cursed.

    “Get ready Kagome,cause here I come!”Kikyo served the ball.Hard.

    Kagome threw it back and it has been going for 5 minutes,then Mr.Sotom came and stopped it.

    “Ok,girls.Kagome wins by 1 point!”Mr.Sotom announced.

    Kagome want to Kikyo and held out a hand to shake.

    Kikyo shook her hand and said, “Good game!”

    “Yeah.Good game.”replied Kagome.

    ‘That Kagome girl is impressive.’Thought Inuyasha.

    End of Chapter 2!

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