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    Feeling Real (Poem)

    care to tell me what you think?
    not that i care
    you aren't real, none of you are
    not in my world
    not in my dream

    a loneliness that seems to creep in
    sink beneath the surface of the paper heart i have
    written down emotions
    the only left
    apathy

    you're not real
    not in my world
    not in my dream

    this endless era of sleeping awake
    seeping through
    the sound of blood droping to the floor
    my blood

    you're not real
    not in my world
    not in my dream
    left sleeping awake...

    ...awake in my dreamland...

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    Nice writing!!......good stuff

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    Haha...very interesting theme that you have there, runs very smoothly and seems to sink in very well....makes my eyes water T-T..very good

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