Results 1 to 7 of 7

Thread: A few of my poems(Poem)

  1. #1
    TCR Owner and Operator Ninrev Sirgem may be famous one day Ninrev Sirgem may be famous one day Ninrev Sirgem's Avatar
    Join Date
    May 2005
    Location
    The land of the Gooch(Goochland), in Virginina. USA
    Posts
    412
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts

    A few of my poems(Poem)

    I walk by the sea,
    And am forced to wonder what it could be.
    Every day it reaches
    Over thousands of beaches.
    Near the surface their is light,
    But farther below it is as dark as night.
    Down in the Oceans deep.
    There lives a creature whose appearance makes men weep.
    He looks up at the sky,
    And watches things fly by through his one eye.

    The Crimson Realms

    The rule of the gods is at an end,
    To their will the mortals will no longer bend.
    Peace cannot be found and the realms go to war,
    But what are they fighting for?
    The gods fight to maintain their power,
    The mortals won't tolerate that for another hour.
    The rebels fight to be free,
    Which the gods will never let be.
    War has descended upon the earth,
    Darkness and Chaos have been given rebirth
    Overhead dark shadows are seen,
    Many wonder what it could mean.
    The sun turns a crimson read,
    About this nothing can be said.
    Many a dark omen appears in the sky,
    But none can answer why.
    But one man does know,
    He stands by his bed and watches the falling red snow.
    He watches the failing light,
    Turn into eternal night.
    The dark one that long ago vanished,
    Is no longer banished.

    Fire

    Thou art truly wonderful fire,
    You are the embodiment of the heart's desire.
    Your wondrous flame,
    Are the source of our fame and shame.
    To you we pray,
    Every single day.
    You are our source of good,
    Which we get by burning coal and wood.
    We use your strength to bash,
    Our enemies into nothing more than ash.
    Even now our great rockets of power,
    Will destory our foes in less than an hour.
    Your destruction is so great,
    That we have destroyed all those which we hate.
    No more of them can be said,
    Because everyone in the world is dead.
    Infernos created through your hand,
    Has unleashed hell's fury upon the land.
    Our enemies live no more,
    They killed us to even the score.
    The earth is now black,
    With all human souls in the reaper's sack.
    A new ray,
    Goes over a land so gray.
    The earth is a lover spurned,
    Who had its human lovers burned.
    No one lives,
    A person receives what he gives.
    Trars.com/forums <---The newest hot rpg place

  2. #2
    Newbie T Elocin may be famous one day T Elocin may be famous one day T Elocin's Avatar
    Join Date
    Feb 2005
    Location
    Virginia, US
    Posts
    92
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
    good! personally, I liked the second 2 better than the first. But, thats just my way of thinking . I'm not saying that its not good too. keep it up!
    "I never stopped loving you, I just stopped letting it show."
    -Unknown

  3. #3
    TCR Owner and Operator Ninrev Sirgem may be famous one day Ninrev Sirgem may be famous one day Ninrev Sirgem's Avatar
    Join Date
    May 2005
    Location
    The land of the Gooch(Goochland), in Virginina. USA
    Posts
    412
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
    Thanks for the support I made these up in like 30 minutes. Ok, I'll make one or two more for you. Thanks for the support.
    Trars.com/forums <---The newest hot rpg place

  4. #4
    You's Trollin Pro Leafblower Champion, Helicopter Champion ketaro is making a name for themselves ketaro is making a name for themselves ketaro's Avatar
    Join Date
    Apr 2005
    Posts
    4,293
    Thanks
    30
    Thanked 38 Times in 36 Posts
    well quite done work dude, i like those poems of yours, keep it up man!!!!>>>>

  5. #5
    TCR Owner and Operator Ninrev Sirgem may be famous one day Ninrev Sirgem may be famous one day Ninrev Sirgem's Avatar
    Join Date
    May 2005
    Location
    The land of the Gooch(Goochland), in Virginina. USA
    Posts
    412
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
    <Bows>

    IF you like my poems, please check out my other written work. My short story. Tell me what you think.
    Trars.com/forums <---The newest hot rpg place

  6. #6
    TCR Owner and Operator Ninrev Sirgem may be famous one day Ninrev Sirgem may be famous one day Ninrev Sirgem's Avatar
    Join Date
    May 2005
    Location
    The land of the Gooch(Goochland), in Virginina. USA
    Posts
    412
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
    ...............
    Last edited by Ninrev Sirgem; May 29, 2005 at 07:02 PM.
    Trars.com/forums <---The newest hot rpg place

  7. #7
    tak
    tak is offline
    Otaku tak may be famous one day tak may be famous one day
    Join Date
    Apr 2005
    Posts
    192
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
    keep up man and kool peom

Bookmarks

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts