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| TCR Owner and Operator Join Date: May 2005 Location: The land of the Gooch(Goochland), in Virginina. USA
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![]() ![]() Credits: 210 | A few of my poems(Poem) I walk by the sea, And am forced to wonder what it could be. Every day it reaches Over thousands of beaches. Near the surface their is light, But farther below it is as dark as night. Down in the Oceans deep. There lives a creature whose appearance makes men weep. He looks up at the sky, And watches things fly by through his one eye. The Crimson Realms The rule of the gods is at an end, To their will the mortals will no longer bend. Peace cannot be found and the realms go to war, But what are they fighting for? The gods fight to maintain their power, The mortals won't tolerate that for another hour. The rebels fight to be free, Which the gods will never let be. War has descended upon the earth, Darkness and Chaos have been given rebirth Overhead dark shadows are seen, Many wonder what it could mean. The sun turns a crimson read, About this nothing can be said. Many a dark omen appears in the sky, But none can answer why. But one man does know, He stands by his bed and watches the falling red snow. He watches the failing light, Turn into eternal night. The dark one that long ago vanished, Is no longer banished. Fire Thou art truly wonderful fire, You are the embodiment of the heart's desire. Your wondrous flame, Are the source of our fame and shame. To you we pray, Every single day. You are our source of good, Which we get by burning coal and wood. We use your strength to bash, Our enemies into nothing more than ash. Even now our great rockets of power, Will destory our foes in less than an hour. Your destruction is so great, That we have destroyed all those which we hate. No more of them can be said, Because everyone in the world is dead. Infernos created through your hand, Has unleashed hell's fury upon the land. Our enemies live no more, They killed us to even the score. The earth is now black, With all human souls in the reaper's sack. A new ray, Goes over a land so gray. The earth is a lover spurned, Who had its human lovers burned. No one lives, A person receives what he gives.
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![]() ![]() Credits: 210 | good! personally, I liked the second 2 better than the first. But, thats just my way of thinking . I'm not saying that its not good too. keep it up!
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![]() ![]() Credits: 210 | Thanks for the support I made these up in like 30 minutes. Ok, I'll make one or two more for you. Thanks for the support.
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![]() ![]() Credits: 210 | <Bows> IF you like my poems, please check out my other written work. My short story. Tell me what you think.
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