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    Re: Fiction Story ~Comments please~

    good...tell when you're finally done.
    i don't want to know more...i might spoiled myself.
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    Re: Fiction Story ~Comments please~

    K Ch 2 everyone ^_^:

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    Nova set off, his head hanging low as he looked around at the woods seeing images of when he was a little pup, playing, hunting, and napping in the sun. It all seemed distance but as he exited the territory he heard vicious snarls behind him; he spun around and a split second later a large male wolf was upon him slamming into him hard and heavy causing Nova to see double for a moment. The male wolf raised his paw, “Pitiful” he muttered and slammed his claws down startled when his nails sank into the dirt.

    “My business has nothing to do with you.” Nova spat at the other wolf

    “Your business has everything to do with me. I am Koga, alpha of this territory.” He glared and swung his paw at Nova again. This was a fatal mistake in a quick move Nova ducked the paw and launched himself at the exposed area of belly sinking in with his teeth Koga screamed with pain and slammed nova sideways with such force he rolled over three times though Koga went as well, par of him anyways. Nova spat out the chunk of flesh and fur smiling as bloodlust took over and he saw Koga stagger.

    “You’re pitiful…” Nova muttered and launched himself on Koga

    “No!!!” A female wolf screamed as he jumped, he landed on Koga sinking his claws into his back but turned up his face to see who shouted. He lost himself in the moment and realized what he had done and was still doing, the female was beautiful and he was ashamed of how he had lost control. He turned and fled off into the woods…
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